|Reviews for Fear|
| Kilrez chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
You're right. It is sweet. It's a nice idea to have Parker afraid of something. And an even better idea to have Jarod there to help.
Hard to beleive english isn't your first language. There was a couple of grammatical errors at the start- not so much errors as just things that wouldn't be put that way normally- but it was very readable.
| Anastasia Who chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
Aw, that was really sweet. I like that when Jarod heard that she was in trouble, he went to her right away. He didn't hesitate, but knew she needed him. That was great. Good story. Very sweet.
| e-dog chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
aww...that was sweet. good job.
| gemini006007 chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
Hi Miss P.
That was short and sweet.
| Galandria the Vampire Queen chapter 1 . 3/17/2004