|Reviews for Till We Meet Again|
| Dark Coco chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Good story, but there's three things you should change.
1. More descriptive writing, especially in between speech.
2. Speech between different people starts on a new line.
3. The space. But some paragraphs in, or at least space it out better.
The dialouge parts were good though & some wording. I'm faving.
| NoWorries chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
That was good, aside from the spacing, well lack there of anyway. Good job!