Reviews for Till We Meet Again
Dark Coco chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Good story, but there's three things you should change.

1. More descriptive writing, especially in between speech.

2. Speech between different people starts on a new line.

3. The space. But some paragraphs in, or at least space it out better.

The dialouge parts were good though & some wording. I'm faving.
NoWorries chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
That was good, aside from the spacing, well lack there of anyway. Good job!