Reviews for Somewhere I Belong II |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe you killed Deliverance! The one person Harry didn't think about protecting |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Mirror? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes I think you handled the interaction between the two oys well. I found it quite believable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another good one, I'm not sure about the whole adoption thing though you know. Harry Snape does not have the same resonance as Harry Potter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy birthday, next time Iguess.. Good story, I think Dillard is a bad guy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fred and George were 7th years so yes probably 17. Good chapter, but I think Dillard is a bad guy. You are going to have to do some fancy footwork to make him good, and if Severus sees him with Harry he will know. And don't make Harry lie to Sev or his friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd like to see Draco come around to the light side. friends. |
![]() ![]() Hey it was a really good one, thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep writing:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww i loved it. tnk u |
![]() ![]() I don't know if your still reading the reviews for this,but I thought I'd point it out boys can't go into the girl's stares turn into a slide when they try to climb up.(it was in one of the books,mabie you diden't read that one before you rote this?)Besides that it was a really good chapter tho. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, just read the whole story & at the end read where you like your readers to post a review to each chapter. Sorry. I usually take the story ID to another site & read it in one long page. But I will keep in mind your comment. Onto the story. An extremely worthwhile sequel to your first posting. I enjoyed that characters development. Poor Harry doesn't seem destined to have "a normal life", you have done a great job on his character. His developing additional magical abilities certainly solved the part of he prophecy "powers he knows not", it was good to read of Voldie's quick demise. Snape, Sirius & Remus; they were all credible characters. The plot was wonderful, the sub-plots enhanced the story. Your descriptions of Harry's flashbacks were well thought out & sensitive to his suffering. Original character, Del, was a happy inclusion in this story. So was Zane. Thankyou for the wonderful read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, so glad I've found this story! It's a gem! Excellent work! |
![]() ![]() i hate professor dilldard .why does hit harry like that? |
![]() ![]() finally ron and mione see sev is a nice person .i like sev-harry bonding .i like his cousin also |
![]() ![]() ron is stupid to think that sev has hurted harry .sev is like a father to harry.i hope harry is happy with him |