Reviews for South
BekaJWP chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
Lovely conclusion to Gabby's feelings and very much in character. Nice descriptions too, especially of the clothes she wore! And Ares at the end...o _. Improvements...umm...a few spelling mistakes...well not exactly mistakes but like the right word but wrong tense i guess (ie 'long' instead of 'longer') if that makes any sense, but nothing else! Enjoyable read overall :)