Reviews for Hidden Girl
Fanficcionista chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
Great! Simply... great. Because I think that that's what the Wishverse is all about: how dark it can get without anyone noticing it.

There is only one thing... one little tiny thing that bothered me... you wrote "wishverce" in the summary instead of "wishverse" (I know I'm annoying as hell, but... that's me).

GrimSage chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
Since this takes place in the 'Wishverse', the true tragedy in this fic is the fact that Dawn will never know that her sister was probably already dead by the time she decided to take her own life.
Who knows, perhaps they ended up in the same heaven or afterlife?
Excellent work with this fic, most impressive.
Dawning Girl chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
Eww. You're so mean!