Reviews for The Dark Castle
Foy chapter 3 . 7/6/2014
I really like it so far, looking forward to seeing the similarities and differences to version 1.

On the relationship side, it seems to me that you're going for a mature, adult Harry. With this in mind I'd find Harry/Snape more believable, with Draco as maybe a friend/comrade/brother? Either one could work though, given enough character development on the Draco side of the equation, just careful not to let it get too out of character (if you want to keep his character that is, change is good too).

(I realize this was a very non-answer review, i really don't have a strong preference)
Rebecca chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
I'm not sure you're aware of this, as it seems to be a formatting issue, but some of your paragraphs appear to be smashed together.

For example, in some paragraphs you have Harry's and Damian's dialogue in the same *excessively* large paragraph so it's impossible to discern who's speaking. Other paragraphs are normal.

I thought you might want to know. Sometimes will change the formatting of stories when you upload them.
Foy chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Wonderful to have you back! Looking promising so far, I can't wait to see what direction you take this in this time. Just a suggestion, maybe put a blurb somewhere about what you're re-writing? I was pretty confused for a minute there.
Guest chapter 39 . 4/30/2013
WalkingStranger99 chapter 30 . 10/22/2012
omg literally laughing my so hard i could not breathe
Spark chapter 39 . 12/18/2011
Great story, though it is too bad it ends there.
Melrose437 chapter 39 . 12/23/2010
i love your story man it's the best and full of wonderful action can't wait to see what happens next
aquakim chapter 39 . 2/27/2010

love the story!

hope you will upload soon!


twilightgatelover chapter 39 . 2/21/2010
Love the story and I love how Harry seems to have gotten alot of people under his thumb. I would really like to see how Blaze or Harry handles the confrontation between the other students and Draco. Please update sonn!
Lady Crescent chapter 39 . 9/17/2009
love it! the plotline also...please update soon!
Kelsey Cullen's Evil Twin chapter 39 . 9/11/2009
Ichigo Mirai chapter 39 . 1/22/2009
this is really really good! please updtae soon!
Ichigo Mirai chapter 30 . 1/21/2009
this is really good and funny chapter! can't wait to read what happens next!
Destined For Hell chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
What's going to happen with Ron and Hermione? I don't really like them I can stand them and I read stories with them in it but there generally not my favs.
gg chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
you wanna update sometime soon?

I've waited over a year already!

I'd like to know how it continues!

Hurry up a little, will you?


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