|Reviews for The Alien connection|
| Max Evelyn chapter 2 . 3/21/2010
so will you update? only just found this sounds intresting.
| cheatachu82 chapter 2 . 1/25/2005
Update soon :D-
| OnlineFisher chapter 2 . 6/18/2004
Please update soon!
Lovin' the story so far :D
| Accidental Paradox chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
A very good start - the diologue is simply peachy! _ Just be careful with minor errors: they aren't that bad at all really but one more proof read would make it word-perfect. Keep it up!
| aceofspades chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
Love it, love it love it.I hope you write more soon cause i am hooked on your story now, so don't leave me hanging.
| Lynn Luther chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
Well, I'll be honest with you. You've got a lot of the language down, and Rimmer's pretty well in character. But! Your punctuation drives me nuts! The period key is a vital and well loved feature of your keyboard. Don't neglect it. Not to mention the fact that you seem to have uploaded an incomplete chapter. If you fix these minor details, then this would be a much better story.