Reviews for Hook and Wendy Loss of Innocence
Guest chapter 4 . 2/20
An awesome story. Captain's scheme to "trap" Wendy was good and it is a shame that you didn't continue it. I would love to know how things were going to be from now on.
HellgirlRP chapter 4 . 8/2/2014
I like the plot of this story so far I tore through the chapters in a few minutes and it wasn't enough this story needs to be continued! Plz The character portrayal is very well done. This is a great pairing ;)
Jazzy chapter 4 . 6/3/2014
Weird and different but hot I love it.
takara410 chapter 4 . 11/23/2013
love it
Smut-Free-Author chapter 4 . 11/2/2013
I enjoyed reading all four of your chapters. Thank you for taking pace into consideration, it made the whole bit much easier to swallow. I would actually like to hear more of this. Wendy enjoys this: will she cast off Peter? Will she get Peter to help her escape? Will she marry James and become Mrs Hook? I would like to hear a resolution. Nicely done.
Me chapter 4 . 10/29/2013
Please, plead update as soon as you can!
darthcat chapter 4 . 9/9/2013
Well, there goes my childhood memories of disney peter pan in neverland;-)
jearley chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
love this please write
SeverusDrarry chapter 4 . 2/6/2010
It's a shame there isn't more to this! It's an awesome story!
Greenhemoglobin chapter 2 . 11/1/2009
quah rape? BAD BAD MAN!
Irving-Braxiatel chapter 4 . 10/2/2009
coolio please continue with this story wud love to read more
PrincessSYS chapter 2 . 8/3/2009
slythrn-barnbum chapter 4 . 2/8/2008
you've done a wonderful start to this story. i hope you continue to update this and that you do it soon!
Celebwen Telcontar chapter 4 . 12/5/2007
Erm... interesting. Please continue.
Volurin chapter 4 . 11/30/2007
In an honest opinion, that was absolutely terrible. You really should consider revising this whole story and edit it. It requires immediate attention.
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