Ok, reviewing again. Sorry about last time. Sleep deprevation is a scary thing.
Woot! Angrybee goodness in a brand new fandom. This is perhaps, just perhaps, your best work. The characters are real and beautifully done. Suspense is givin in all the right places. (Who is Tomi? What the -hell- is wrong with Yuki all of the sudden.) The plot is rich and draws you in right away. I'm waiting for more oh goddess of the fanfic.

Wow, that was amazing,and it's just the first chapter!
Poor Ryu-chan, poor poor Ryu-chan. Although this Tomi person, that's a mystery.
Now, poor poor poor little Shuichi, and bad Yuki! Is Ryuichi going to break his promise? If not, I'm sure someone would be willing to deal with Yuki. I also wonder what Yuki says to Shuichi when he calls, hm, angsty. love it!
I'll be waiting as patiently as I can for the next chapter. So G'luck and G'bye!

A very good beginning. I like the look into Ryuichi's mind, and the tidbits dropped into the chapter about Tomi and Yuki make me hope you plan on updating frequently and quickly. I think I'll go check out your RK fics as well.

It can't really review this right now. I will later. I hope you don't mind getting two reviews. Keep going with this. This is good. I want more. Please? :)

Ara?
What are you doing in the Gravitation section, Angrybee? *blink blink* Not that I'm complaining or anything... (urk! Just notticed you updated San Akoyagai! Sorry!)
How do you do it? The mix of humor and drama, the excellent characterization (I love Ryu-kun!), the captivating plot. Poor Shu-chan! Bad Yuki! No Harry Potter for him! Every story is so unique. *Kumagoro Beams Angrybee* hee hee
Thank you so much for sharing. I look forward to your next chapter. _

Ok. Here's the thing.
This.
Is.
Brilliant.
No, seriously, not butt kissing, no sucking up, this is seriously, down to earth awsome. Please, please, please, please keep this up becaue it's certainly one of the best fanfiction's I've ever read, and an excellent Ryuichi fic. Pleae write the next chapter soon becaues it's wonderful. The characterisaion is excellent, you've hooked us all up with the plot, the way you've got him thinking is... wow. He seems such a hard character to get right but you've done it! So please, write more! This is going to my favorite lists now. Thanks again!

*cries*
I was tricked! Into reading a sad fic... ;_; But I can't admit that it wasn't very good, and now I'm hooked. So please keep going!

Incredible. Absolutely perfect! Great first chapter and I'll definitely read and review the next one once you update it. I have a very good feeling for this fic and I'll add this in my fav. author's and stories list! Can't wait to see yhte next chapter!
-Elk

I'm awed and inspired by this amazing piece of work, and I'll be looking forward to future installments. You've made Ryuichi into a colorful but REAL person living with a disability, a busy career and a heart filled with beautiful uncontained FEELING, both for himself and for the world around him. Watching this imperfect man trying to save another imperfect man is addictive, I'll be coming back for more!

OOh, I like it. It's really good! Probably one of the more well written Gravitation fics I've read. Update soon!

I found this chapter rather interesting. I like how characterize Ryuichi . I look forward to reading more if you contine.
Keep it up .~

_ Poor Ryu-chan and Shu-chan! I hope they get better! _ STUPID YUKI! ...Actually, i do support the Yuki/Shu-chan pairing, but my mind is open.
_ I liked the part where Tohma was psychic. "Now uncross your fingers and promise again." _
Update and tell what happens! Poor Shu-chan!