Reviews for Finished you men
Ems4179 chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Wow, interesting. I like it.

Despite what others have said, I can certainly imagine Quistis finally snapping at being treated this way. I'm not entirely sure why others would suggest she would become a lesbian because she was sick of doesn't quite work that way. _
sissyHIYAH chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Contrary to what other people have said in these reviews, I can really see Quistis going mad with anger at the unjust rule of men. The thanks she offered to the men in her life at the end seemed very fitting for your version of Quistis.

I really, really enjoyed this. You've made bitter and resentful work for her. Too many make her out to be nice and respectful, so I loved the chance to see her take control. (After all, she uses a whip for a reason, right?)

Oh! And thanks for the review! I really appreciate it!
Shadow The Ninja Kitten chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
This was a good attempt at a serious fic,but you made some mistakes:

Quistis was terribly would she settle for being a waitress when she could find a better job like working at an upsclae clothing store?And why would she turn into a murderer?

Seifer-I don't see why he'd go all the way to Trabia just to make Quistis's life the game,he didn't go out of his way to make her life miserable;he just left her alone .

And I'm wondering why the Trabia staff didn't bother tracing the porn picture to Seifer and then punishing had them just seeing the pic and them firing Quistis without investigating the incident.

If Quistis was really finished with men,she would'nt of become a ,she most likely would've become a lesbian.

Aside from those mistakes,your fic was good.
Quisty Almasy chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Wow this was very different but I loved it ) I especially liked that Justin Timberlake remark lol. However, it's a little hard to believe that Quistis would do these things but hey, it's always interesting what an writer could do with an ooc Quistis _ Please write more stuff like this.
Alonia Everclear chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Wow what an interesting take on Quistis and her feelings. Not too shabby for your first attempt at a serious fic :D.
PodSara chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Hi there...I noticed you posted all OVER my review pages and thought I'd take a peek at your work.

I have a bit of CC for you...I think you've got talent...and this is an interesting idea, but there are a few things you might want to work on. First, I noticed you used the wrong tense or case of certain words from time to time - thought instead of think, etc. It kind of seemed like you were switching from present to past tense from time to time. Also, never understimate the value of a spellchecker. There are quite a number of type-o's and your computer's spell checker will catch them, so take advantage of all the wonders technology has to offer! :)

I can see Quistis getting bitter over men...and you're right, this is different, but I'd like to see more details...that would make this story that much better.

Thanks for reviewing my work...much appreciated! Good luck, and keep writing!
Karla3 chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Very intriuging. I wonder what made you come up with an idea like this. Because you really are great at writing serious stuff, you should write more. This had some great attitude, way cool. Especially the last bits "I owe to the men that made my life turn out like this" Awesome.
TianDogg chapter 1 . 11/12/2004
Hey that was cool as hell, felt very surreal. I thought Quistis was gonna get a gut if she kept drinking, but I guess it really doesn't matter at the end. It was nice to see an old favorite get nicely reinvented.
Selphie Kinneas chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
Wow... your very right about the 'shocking' part. Anyways, i couldn't find anything to say CC about exempt that you used the word 'grope' in the wrong way.

It means to find or look for I cna't imagine (i could be wrong) why that would cuase his death, or intimdate Quistis. If I was wrong please tell me! Other than that, your story was brutal but the honest truth, woman are never respected as much as men, (AND I HATE THEM FOR THAT!) but no one gives a crap. Go dress up as whores and do whatever the hell you want, sheesh don't even TRY to make a better impression.

I myself am Muslim so a woman is to stay modest, my parents takes this WAY to seriously. Im not kidding.

Keep up the great work! (Even if they have sadistic endings)
Rin RavenIce chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
Wow...*blinks a few times*...i'm...stunned...*rubs her eyes* Did I really read that? Whoa...



That was freaky yet very good. I've had similar thoughts about men, but I don't have a fan club to back me up.
Verdanii-the writer chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Agh, man,

really thank you for your time and your helpful comments...I never EVER expected to get this much feedback, so thank you ~ for those who'll read this: THANKIES.
Shovel chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Damn. Loved the part about her killing the boss. Funny, disturbing and a bit weird. Loved it. Lols.

Ah, you are a great writer indeed. Fast paced and funny. ;;
Frozen To Death chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
oeh this one was good! I like it! Quistis killing men, that's something new! To bad they hung her..:p
Anime-freak-4life chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
i like it, damn all perverted male leaders to hell! lol please keep it up!
Draic chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Not sure if I reviewed before...
Summarised reactions:
Justin Timberlake: no-no.
Squall offer Quistis Headmaster job: worked well... but why couldn't she choose to be a normal SeeD?
Scene with Irvine: good.
Seifer: Strange, but not bad. Just... unexplained.
Why couldn't Quistis find a better job? eg, monster hunting?
sex scandal snippets: good. effective.
Comment about lesbians: confusing - why doesn't Quis start to hate THEM as well?
Killing her employer: worked VERY well.
Trepie Army: both amusing and thoroughly disturbing - will stick in my mind.
Don't really 'believe' the rest of the story - Quistis is too far out of character. Logic gets strange... why Laguna? She KNOWS Laguna and 'didn't want to hurt Squall'. If she wanted to kill Laguna, surely she'd want to kill Squall as well (Male leader!) She started off being mad at pervs, and ended up killing off powerful males - not just the 'sex scandal' ones... how does that solve the problem?
I actually liked the idea a lot... but it became less and less believable as it went on. If this was an original character in an original world, I think it would work better.
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