Reviews for Bias
baudelaire7 chapter 3 . 9/28/2005
Awesome! It's really sad, really good. Keep going!
kristin chapter 3 . 8/1/2005
Your story is great so far. Can you please add the next chapter? I really want to find out what happens between Manny and Ellie. Who is Sully? Is he a real chaacter in the show or one of yours?
runawayrobot chapter 3 . 2/9/2005
this story is getting good update soon!
bomp8032000 chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
keep writtin
me chapter 3 . 9/3/2004
that is... interesting... but disturbing.. it is well written though... its just kinda... ok very disturbing
baroobala chapter 3 . 7/21/2004
Wow. I really wanna know what happens now...
karmakaze chapter 3 . 5/24/2004
PLEASE have Sully get in trouble. God, and then he slapped her too? What an asshole, make him
s-u-f-f-e-r!
Really suspeseful, please continue!
karmakaze chapter 2 . 4/30/2004
Please update! I MUST know what happens!
Autumn Laborra chapter 2 . 4/17/2004
I really wish this chapter was longer... Some of the sentances are worded akwardly, and you need to double-check your dialogue punctuation.
I really like the concept of the story, and want to read more!
karmakaze chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
Oh my God. Sully is HORRIBLE! How could he do that to her?
Continue and have her do SOMETHING, press charges at least!
Daily chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
Girl you know who this is: ESR. Listen we're friends as one friend to another finish this story. I like it and you know me I'm a born critic so if i say it's good it's good. So FINISH!
Me chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
plz write more!
Lildancer101 chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
write more please
krzyblkgurl103 chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
interesting.. oh yeah people are trying to review you but you only except signed reviews