|Reviews for Calamity's Breach|
| alyss92 chapter 39 . 6/25/2008
Your fanfic is amazing. I love your writing. I've been reading your story non-stop for the past couple of days so my eyes can finally rest now. lol xD You have officialy made my new favorite pairing Rin/Kohaku. I just need to find another great fic with them in it now. The one thing Im sadden about is that now Kagome is more miserable then she was before and that she's not with Inuyasha. T.T I can't wait for the next update.
| Raniatlw chapter 39 . 6/23/2008
More Rin and Kohaku goodness! Yay! I loved this chapter, it was awesome. And it was nice to see Inuyasha and Miroku in it too. It's been a long time. Anyways, update as soon as you can.
| Darksouled Saiyanphoenix chapter 39 . 6/22/2008
I am so glad that they have finally opened up to each other i think it will make things alot easier for each other! I loved the garden by the way!
| Destatikai chapter 39 . 6/22/2008
AH! This is the chapter that I've been waiting for! I can't believe that the story has reached this point, haha. To be honest, when I was reading about Kagome in this chapter, I completely forgot what happened to her in the first few chapters of the story, and I don't think I'll be able to find those parts again... ;
I can't wait for the next chapter now that Rin and Kohaku have finally received closure for their pasts!
| ezap3 chapter 39 . 6/22/2008
It's been awhile since I've read any Kohaku/Rin fluff. And this chapter is an amazing example of what I needed. Well it's late and I don't want to bore you with my drabbling. Great chapter!
| senbo-sama chapter 39 . 6/21/2008
Oh my god, that Kohaku/Rin scene was beautiful. 600! ...uh...how much longer chapter wise do you think it'll be? YOU MUST UPDATE!
| starlight15 chapter 39 . 6/21/2008
Everything is really starting to come together; Shippo's and Kohaku's truce, so to speak, Shippo's and Souten's relationship, and Rin's and Kohoku's relationship.
I wonder what will happen with Inuyasha and Kagome. Actually, come to think of it, I wonder how Kagome is coping right now...
The garden scene was a very nice touch. I could see it so clearly in my mind, and the analogies you linked with it suited the underlying theme of the story so well.
Haha: "Can I get a happy ending?" Shippou just keeps making me laugh and laugh and laugh.
The little RinKohoku scenes are the ones I love most though. Just little things like her scooting over closer to Kohoku, Kohoku holding hands with her... It makes the scene so palpable to me. It makes it that much more realistic and easy to relate to.
When Kohoku and Rin came to terms with each other... That was just the cherry on top of a perfect cake. Rin always just knows what to say and why. Saying that she forgave him was the most powerful thing she could've done, and she knew that. I love the last scene beyond words. I can't even describe all the things I love about it. It would take too much time, space, and too many words to bring justice to it.
| moviefan-92 chapter 39 . 6/21/2008
500 pages? Wow! But only 100 more? NO! I love this fic too much for it to end. I just love Rin and Kohaku pairings. We need more. Though this one is by far the best I've read.
| Yami Umi chapter 39 . 6/21/2008
) I'm happy now. Thanks
| Shisoukengo chapter 39 . 6/21/2008
I love it, absolutely love it. The humor (Shippo's happy ending comment nearly had me hysterical), the drama of Rin and Kohaku's confessions, and the intensity of their closeness during the end. All of it was wonderful, and I'm glad I stayed up late enough to read it. Now it's off to bed for me as well.
| Aida-chan chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I still love this story soo much. I really hope you continue it even though the manga has now ended
| Hiroen Nnir chapter 38 . 6/10/2008
OH MY GOODNESS! where do I begin? this has to be the BEST BEST BEST inuyasha fanfiction I've ever read! Kohaku and Rin are the cutest! the little part where Rin and Sesshoumaru hug was the most precious thing ever! I totally fell in love with that scene! I didn't really like the pairings of Shippo and Souten or Sesshoumaru and Kagura but I still loved your story! It's sad what happened with Kagome and Inuyasha and I hope they get together! they're only happy when they're togheter right? anyway! I'm really glad I found this story and decided to read it! Thank you so much! please hurry and up-date! I can't wait to read more and have the SO MANY questions, running in my head, answered!
| Suka-Kitsune chapter 38 . 6/2/2008
I remember reading this story years ago, and every once in a while I would check up on it. It is the kind of story that you just can't forget, the kind that leaves you hoping. I am so glad that you updated. You have serious talent and you are the best Rin/Kohaku writer I have ever read. So kudos to you :) Keep up the awesomeness.
| Okuyukashii chapter 38 . 6/2/2008
I really love this story! It is well written and th plot is amazing...I love Rin and Kohaku and this is the first time I saw Shippo and Souten...I really like that pairing! Just the beginning? Well, I hope to see more!
| nessie6 chapter 38 . 5/17/2008
Loved it! Kohaku/Rin makes me feel all cozy and warm inside, and it reminds me how much I hate the Sesshoumaru/Rin pairing (because face it, we all know that secretly Sess is a wild beast in the sack and Rin needs someone that would be sweet and gentle and can learn w/her :D). AND HERE WE HAVE SHIPPO/SOUTEN CLOSURE! Yaay! Something's resolved! Oh and my suspicions of Kajuu and Mamoru have increased! I can possibly see what Kajuu has to gain by ridding Sess (and Rin, too, I guess) in that he would probably take over since he's like, second-in-command. I can't see so much w/Mamoru, unless maybe she's his secret lover...unless I'm looking too much into it? Except we STILL don't really know who the hell those assassins are REALLY after (Sess? Kohaku? Rin? Even Kagura, maybe?).
I love how Kohaku's slowly realizing how much Rin ACTUALLY means to him. "The most gorgeous being he had ever seen" oh it made me go all fangirlish. And when he carried her to her bed! I haven't been this excited since she fell asleep in front of him on Jinsoku! Or when he kissed her forehead at the wolves' den! XD
I secretly want Kohaku to continue wearing all black. Because it would be nice if he was still sexy and mysterious in a tall, dark, and handsome way. Oh, and I was wondering, does Rin have knowledge he slaughtered his village? I'd actually would really like to see her reaction to that.
Oh, and don't worry about being TOO subtle (w/me at least, I don't know if this applies for other people) because I read too much into things (after a few episodes of Samurai Champloo in which there are several different expressions during key moments, I'm convinced Mugen and Fuu are madly in love...Fuu just can't help but swoon at Jin's feet, though, because he's just that cool). Anyways, it wouldn't be really in-character for Sess to like...throw himself in front of Kagura to save her from the dart when he could've just easily nudged her out of the way XD. It would ruin his reputation for having a cold/calm demeanor.
Oh, and if you have time, you should check this flash-video out (features L, Ichigo, Ishida, Harry Potter, Sirius Black, and Jin), it's really random but the first time I saw it I couldn't help but find it hilarious. Maybe b/c it doesn't make sense.
Anyways, I really really loved this and I cannot wait for the next chapter! Update asap!