|Reviews for The Inevitable|
| katie chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
| Darrel Doomvomit chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
you need to work on keeping the tense constant throughout your story, and you really need a beta. also, you mentioned the girls name, i think, but kinda out of the blue. try keeping your authors notes either al at the end or all at the beginning. otherwise, really great start, keep writing.
| Ren201 chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
Hey. this is good, so carry on writing, because I'm reading it! lol.
Was wondering what time frame this was written in, was it season 2 or 3, or maybe 1? Sorry if you alredy mentioned that, but I wasn't sure.
Anyways, I wonder if Sara is working for Irina or Sark, or someone else?
| mel chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
so who does Sara work for?
great start, by the way. keep going.