|Reviews for M7 meets South Africa|
| Cassandra30 chapter 6 . 1/20/2006
wow! good action sequence as well. you also dealt well with the psychology the gilrs felt when they saw that man die and you described the scene well. well written.
| Cassandra30 chapter 5 . 1/20/2006
yes I am reading the story. Its very good. I would like to point out though that the girls wouldn't necessarily go into witness protecton in the US and might indeed just go back to South Africa. However that would ruin your story. :) Its well written and moves right along. Your dialouge sparkles with wit and individuality. you have done a remarkable job. good going.
| KB chapter 6 . 11/13/2004
This is very good so far. But you can't leave it there. I need to know what happens.
| Crazy chapter 5 . 11/1/2004
What a horrid thing to do, leaving us hanging like this. Please please Please, put the rest of the chapters up! *giggles*
I love the manipulation. So much fun. And oh the suffering...
Poor Chris, putting up with a bunch of 'children.'
Here's to hoping there will be more.
| Kathy chapter 5 . 4/23/2004
I have copied the files to read soon...so there is someone out here...comments to come!