Reviews for My Ain True Love
penguins-ate-me chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
aw! i cried during this and my sister kept asking me why...

ive been depressed for a while and suicide has crossed my has cutting...4 cuts...

but the reasons are my supposive "friends"

they ignore me, think im gay, and try to not do anything with me...

and i think i deserve it...
yllom21 chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
WOW! Very well written and very depressing. I like Sakura's shout, very realistic. Wonderful job.
Nanashi Bakemono chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
that was realli sad-but realli nice! hehe...that dont make sense does it?

well anyways i luv the story! isnt the old hokage man dead? graduation?
Elaine du Lac chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
I love this! By the way, I know the music and the way the song is sang fits well into this fic but the lyrics itself are not a perfect match but anyways...that was really one hell of a tear jerker. I like the way Naruto died, like Don Quixote who finally regained his sanity and died with dignified, serious and serene mien. Naruto finally shows his real, self. Kirei...
Kitsune of Mist chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Wow you're good. You're one of the few fanfic authors that made me cry because of their fanfics. Good job. It was really sad though.
Kari chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
ok... this was... just so sad. Very emotional!Maybe you could write a second chapter on how his death has effected everyone close to him as the years go by? So... Did Naruto love Sasuke? Did Sasuke love Naruto? *wants more details on this*
struggling soul chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
thank you very much! for the note at the end! Your right, people are there for me, ones I overlooked because I wanted more attention...but the Lords Prayer at the top, brought me true happiness, of course God is always with me. I am never truly alone, thanx, I need a moment now, but I will continue to live for thoes who care, depression or no, I know now that I can pull out of it! Its time I start living!
Souvraya chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
oh my god... *wipes away tears* that really went straight to my heart. it's scary when people who don't even know me can stir such emotions in me. i always thought i was too cold to be moved by something like this, but you just proved me wrong. it's amazing...
Jiyu Hatell Kodai chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
As a first draft, this was amazing. The emotion placed into it could make one cry. *Is wiping some of her own tears away.* And Sakura yelling at the group at the end held so much emotion (though I think fucking assholes could discribe the people just as well).
only thing you need to do is re-read over for spelling errors. I found two such as 'ban' instead of 'bane' (found in the second paragraph of the funeral scene) and in the last paragraph of the funeral scene you had 'attach' instead of 'attack'. Just to point out the ones I saw. :D