|Reviews for Once its gone|
| ChernobylKrigare chapter 4 . 5/18/2008
Update sooner this time you said, eh?
Yeah, I've dropped a couple stories. Lost inspiration? Or just writer's block?
Either way, I loved this story for how long it lasted. I wish you had posted more, but thank you for giving us what you did.
I had fun reading it.
| JesterBellsILove chapter 4 . 1/22/2008
This is so excelent, and so heartwrenching. I love Remus so much.
| Reaper1Nanashi chapter 4 . 11/12/2007
THREE YEARS SINCE YOU'VE UPDATED! Ah well, I agree. Education must come first.
What I really like is the development of ALL characters, not some. Most stories center around James/Sirius, or Sirius/Remus, if it's slash, and most always forget about Wormtail. I mean, HELLO! Four maruaders! But you show what all of them are feeling, not just one.
Try and update as soon as you can! PLEASE!
| TenFiftyOne chapter 4 . 10/31/2005
Please update! I really want to find out what happens! I'm so desperate that if you tell me what's supposed to happen in the next chapter- I'll write it for you! ARGH! Need more of this fic! I really like reading your writing- it's easy to follow and has a nice flow to it- I'm also still anxious to know what is wrong with Remus which is good- normally by about the third chapter fan-fics can tend to lose their magic (pardon the pun)- yours hasn't.
Anyway, please update or if you're not intending to email me and tell me what was going to happen etc? Please?
Happy writings (hopefully)!
| Goddess of Idun chapter 4 . 8/28/2005
it's great, hope you update
| hermioneluver333 chapter 4 . 4/25/2005
Wow! This story is amazing! I especially love your portrayal of Peter. I never would have thought of him that way, but I can totally see it now. Especially his feelings toward Sirius which could have led to him framming Sirius.
You have quite a few grammatical errors, so I would recommend you get a Beta Reader to edit them before you post. If you would like, I would love to beta this story for you. If you would like me to, please email me at ponylovinzag
Once again, great story! Keep up the amazing work, and I hope to see more chapters soon!
| Inri the Damned chapter 2 . 4/13/2005
this hasn't been updated since november last year! that is pathetic! i'm ashamed to be hoplessly hooked to a story written by a person who cares so little for us faithful fans!
| Inri the Damned chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
more? why are you waiting so long to update? its been ages!
| Inri the Damned chapter 4 . 3/14/2005
Liar. It's been ages since you updated. You haven't updated all YEAR! Unless you're dead there is no excuse. If you are dead then I apologise.
| Marstri chapter 4 . 2/15/2005
He is rather confused, isn't he? I liked the way you had Peter step in immediately when Sirius was rude to Lily; it reinforces your more positive (but not unrealistic) view of Peter while they were all still school friends. I hope you haven't given up on this - keep at it.
| CSMichaelis chapter 4 . 1/27/2005
I really like this story it is a different idea and I just cant wait to read more of it. I like that you have done it all in each one's view and how they feel. I am very much interested to find out what happens
please review soon
| Isa chapter 4 . 12/10/2004
This fic is so perfect! Please, update soon, I can't wait to read the rest... :D
| LupinLover99 chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
this is bloody brilliant! it made my heart break! poor remus! good job. :)
| Kaori7395 chapter 4 . 11/29/2004
Aww! Siri just called him MY Remus! Thats so sweet! And hes jealouse! Thats sweet, too!
Cant wait for the next Chapter! Whos POV will it be? Lilys?
| rosiegirl chapter 4 . 11/25/2004
Great story. More soon.