Reviews for The New Light of the Stars
nascar386479 chapter 1 . 4/6
I love Sessomaru and Rin. Awesome story!
Hilary Duff chapter 1 . 4/3
You used weird scattering of Japanese and didn't explain what they were, no one wants to have to google every few sentences if they don't know Japanese, try a list at the bottom or something

It's quiet not quite
Its revelling not revealing, at least in the context you used it in

Plus for all the virginal writers out there...THERES NO SUCH THING AS A VIRGINAL BARRIER. HYMENS ARE NOT A BARRIER. THEY DO NOT ALWAYS BREAK DURING SEX AND EVEN IF THEY DID, THE MALE WOULD NEVER NOTICE THAT CRAP OUTSIDE OF SEEING HER FLINCH WHICH SHES PROBABLY GOING TO DO ANYWAY
ddddaaaae chapter 1 . 1/20/2016
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Madeylnn Rose chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
that was a great story... very well written and you portrayed the characters beautifully...
overninethousand chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
this;

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X chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
It could have been a great story but mixing in the Hilary Duff just made me die laughing...
Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
it would be so funny if just then jaken showed up XD
Miss Rune chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Great story and Sesshomaru was perfectly portrayed ;)
MelissaRM chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
nice
Celestial Cat chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Beautiful! You captured their pleasure well! Good job and keep it up!

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Moonlight Mermaid chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
I liked very much :)
Ladii Emelia chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Cute story.
Chelsea chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I really liked this little story. It was a quick refreshing read. Very well put together and smooth to read. Also very sweet. Keep up the great work!
Splishboom chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Enjoyed the story, the Japanese was a little confusing, tho' _
IamKrystalSoul chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
awwww so cute! this was really well written i enjoyed it alot.
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