Reviews for Trouble
Neeros chapter 20 . 9/23/2013
Great story, but I can't help but feel the ending made it all a little pointless. There was adventure but no accomplishment. Still though, it was all well written.
Neeros chapter 19 . 9/23/2013
Sad revan didn't kill him.
Driger117 chapter 20 . 6/21/2013
the ending could continue into a mass effect crossover
Dan1234567890 chapter 19 . 9/4/2012
Good ending on the fight.
Guest chapter 17 . 9/4/2012
Love the plot.
Dan1234567890 chapter 15 . 9/3/2012
So it seems that fate will not change no matter what. PADME GIVE BIRTH ALREADY! xD
Dan1234567890 chapter 6 . 9/3/2012
I like how Sidious is not almighty, that he too has to do his homework xD
Dan1234567890 chapter 5 . 9/3/2012
For a moment I wished they'd go into the ghost sith lord's tomb :P
Dan1234567890 chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
I love this story :)
Dan1234567890 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Waow, nicely written and very interesting!
Anonymous chapter 20 . 5/15/2012
I really hate the ending of this do you think Revan would trust a vision that can end the war if he can just finish it right now without having sacrificing anything. Revan with his memory restored doesn't have a problem using the dark side as seen in the official comics and how can Revan can't defeat a Sith Lord who is just one person when he stormed a station with hundreds of sith with just his companions and succeeded killing Darth Malak who as your story suggest is on the same level of Darth Sidious.
lazyguy90 chapter 20 . 11/24/2011
Great work on this. Very nicely done.
chisscientist chapter 20 . 3/11/2011
Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. Interesting premise and good characterization. The ending felt a bit anticlimactic, but it was clever.
mfmxxx chapter 20 . 1/13/2011
Nice fic, I just didnt like how Yoda of all people was smarter than Revan. /

I myself am writing a rewrite of the seventys films, but with Luke raised differently, and not by Vader. -)
RayStriker chapter 20 . 1/12/2011
A very well thought out and well put together story worthy of being a novel printed as the continuation of the original Knights of the Old Republic. I enjoyed the continuity and how well the idea of what happened in the original movies came to pass along with the setting in the time line to be put before Attack of the Clones. it was an excellent story to read from start to finish keeping the humor of Bastila, HK-47, Revan, and all the rest. The story put into place for the events even sets itself as an explanation for certain things in The Old Republic MMO like Satele Shan. Making a story with the feel of having a Star Wars novel in my hand giving the thrilling story that is the Star Wars series was my only concern and by far the entire publication has exceeded my expectations. My only complaints are simple typos and grammar mistakes but all in all this in my book is truly worthy of a the title "Star Wars Knights Of The Old Republic: Trouble" as if I opened the book and could see the words explaining how the book tells the events that occurred after Knights of The Old Republic into the events of Revenge of The Sith and Return of The Jedi. Truly in my book I can consider this the sequel story of Knights of The Old Republic, you have done a tremendous job and I thank you for this story and hope to one day see it on the shelves as a Star Wars story. Excellent Job.
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