Reviews for Trouble
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 3 . 6/7
so... one of Sideous'es plants... well.
how nice.
and creative!
and tricksty.

honestly im almost more curious about this concept if they got dropped smack dab in the middle of the clone wars... hmmm.
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 2 . 6/7
funs tuff. the messy, messy time line...

i mean hell going from this divergent...

the whats was it the Sith Triumvirate that messed up the galaxy in the aftermath of Malaks defeat Exile finishes that off...

only then some time passes and that Sith emperor invadaes the galaxy... lots of stuff goes down, eventually the sith as they are destroyed or rather decentralized..

Darth Ruin takes over after time things go on and on...

Skere Kann brotherhood of darkness...

eventually leading to the army of light and Bane doing manipulations also the rule of Two...

lots of stuff. I forget where Exaur Kun fits in but... yeah.

So catching up is going to be interesting, hell the millitary is a bit more... well.

hope you handle the jedi well. and that any arguments... have been argued about for CENTURIES and their are all very... well covered alot of ground and all.

and REALLY hope you dont do the whole video game stuff more impressive meaning utter pawning of more main stream folks... well.
heres a hoping.

Fredon Nad
Neeros chapter 20 . 9/23/2013
Great story, but I can't help but feel the ending made it all a little pointless. There was adventure but no accomplishment. Still though, it was all well written.
Neeros chapter 19 . 9/23/2013
Sad revan didn't kill him.
Driger117 chapter 20 . 6/21/2013
the ending could continue into a mass effect crossover
Dan1234567890 chapter 19 . 9/4/2012
Good ending on the fight.
Guest chapter 17 . 9/4/2012
Love the plot.
Dan1234567890 chapter 15 . 9/3/2012
So it seems that fate will not change no matter what. PADME GIVE BIRTH ALREADY! xD
Dan1234567890 chapter 6 . 9/3/2012
I like how Sidious is not almighty, that he too has to do his homework xD
Dan1234567890 chapter 5 . 9/3/2012
For a moment I wished they'd go into the ghost sith lord's tomb :P
Dan1234567890 chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
I love this story :)
Dan1234567890 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Waow, nicely written and very interesting!
Anonymous chapter 20 . 5/15/2012
I really hate the ending of this do you think Revan would trust a vision that can end the war if he can just finish it right now without having sacrificing anything. Revan with his memory restored doesn't have a problem using the dark side as seen in the official comics and how can Revan can't defeat a Sith Lord who is just one person when he stormed a station with hundreds of sith with just his companions and succeeded killing Darth Malak who as your story suggest is on the same level of Darth Sidious.
lazyguy90 chapter 20 . 11/24/2011
Great work on this. Very nicely done.
chisscientist chapter 20 . 3/11/2011
Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. Interesting premise and good characterization. The ending felt a bit anticlimactic, but it was clever.
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