Reviews for My first
Stanka Pooh010 chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
I really like that if you don;t mind i will like 2 read this to my skool and have people act it out as i am reading it behind the curtain! thanx 4 dat makes me wonder if i should wait 4 my first! peace and luv homie!
Stacia Hayes- Jackson chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
I really wasin to that you should write a poetry book about the important things about life like sex, the drugs, the abuse andso on thanx i will always remenber that! Peace!
Jessy chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Dita chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
Wow. I didn't like it all that much. Simply because I think you tried too hard. Really, getting rid of some of the punctuation would go over better too, reading too many periods lost my interest, like you were trying to be suspenseful. Nonetheless, I think you can do much, much better. Be a little more subtle, though.
someone chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
ooh, that was so nice. great descriptions, really beautiful and sensual. keep it up!
bonny chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
THIS is so good.
I'm speechless!