|Reviews for Return of a Stranger|
| Ruokjean-neigh chapter 7 . 12/20/2015
Ok I really like the story. It's interesting and original. But I think I have to stop reading it. It's not the plot or characters or anything of the sort. It's the Japanese. It's annoying as hell. I don't speak Japanese. I don't read Japanese. I don't know the language and every time I read this story, it's right there. It's unnecessary. It is actually detracting from your story. It will only make the story better if you take it out. I have to literally stop reading your story because with it unnecessarily in there it is painful to read. You are a good writer. Don't ruin it with weeaboo shit. Respect yourself more than that.
| Aya Wanderlust chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
Wow i love this prologue. Enough to catch a reader's attention and the twist of pain -ok im just being dramatic. On with the story... hehe.
Interesting story. Hope im gonna enjoy it!
| TheDragonPrinces chapter 17 . 4/13/2015
Maah, maah... What happened to the two different endings? One yaoi, one straight? Did they get scrapped? Are they in a different fic? Are they yet to be written?
Oh, right, review, uhm... I really liked the story, it was exciting, thrilling, mysterious yet informative... I liked the style you used while writing it. I also liked how you made Kyuubi somewhat caring towards Natsu behind all the anger and hate, but in a way where the demon could mask it as selfishness and/or self-preservation. Or at least, I think he masked it.
Anyway, I'm going to log off and do something with my life now. Thank you for your wonderful contribution to this fandom!
| CheschireSmiles chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
I like the idea you have of Itachi raising Naruto, and Baku for a time, but you have a lot of grammar errors. They are mostly repeats of the same few errors: missing words, mispellings, incorrect word tenses (specifically were and was), and incorrect punctuation-mostly lack of commas. There were also a few sentences that just needed rewording along with incorrect ussage of "then" (avword used to show a sequence of events in time) and "than" (a word used to show comparison between two things).
| Deadly Shadow chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
-And that is all for my first review.
| brokenfromthepast chapter 17 . 2/28/2013
This is really great! I really liked it.
| onlytoask chapter 2 . 2/17/2013
The writing isn't very good. The story seems mediocre, but that's probably just because it's only the second chapter.
| dudeguypersondude chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
Tentrn... like...sasuke?! I should stop reading this story right here, right now.
| Sebby-chan3000 chapter 17 . 7/3/2012
omg...such an awesome story...cant wait to read it again
| blklover chapter 17 . 6/4/2012
| Chriscro165 chapter 17 . 5/22/2011
This is great!
| Sora Nadeshiko chapter 2 . 2/26/2010
er... um... is this yaoi? because the chapter 1 sounded yaoi-ish... i dont like yaoi...
| icekrim91 chapter 17 . 8/26/2009
cool...i really enjoyed reading that fic..it is very interesting and intense when it came to the action..at some point i find it funny because of the character name Joshua...overall, it is an awesome fic..can't wait to read more from you
| Wolf Lord Fenrir chapter 17 . 6/28/2009
normally i can follow the most confusing stories, but what the hell. the ending left a dozen questions unanswered, and created a dozen more. is there going to be a sequel or is it going to torture us for all eternity. on a different note, great story
| jesi ki kage chapter 17 . 11/17/2008
Cool!that was so cool!as i was reading i thought of many different ways to end the story but i think your way was the best!