|Reviews for Vacation|
| Uchiha Itachi chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
I LOVE THIS STORY I READ IT MANY TIMES
| mahwish1 chapter 24 . 8/14/2012
Nice story. :) Loved it,
| Moonlight Serenity chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Have I really never favorited this?
| meriya chapter 16 . 2/3/2011
okai i jus started reading the starting of the chapter, and i kinda don't lik it, why is kai being so abused?
...ill give you my final comment when i am done this chapter, sorry i jus wanted to send this before i forgot :)
| meriya chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
okai i like everything but the line where kai says something in russian and looks away
... iunno, it jus seems werid :S
| you dun need to know chapter 7 . 2/2/2011
i really liked it, i dun kno y u think its stupid
| noell chapter 24 . 1/4/2010
i do not think the fic was crapy i really thought it was well writen keep up the very awsome work your doing and i enjoyed this fic very much you should make a sequel to this fanfic maybe call it hilay and kai in the future it was just an idea well i g2g
| Anime Onnanoko chapter 24 . 3/15/2008
that was really good, aww the ending was really sweet
| xoverfiend chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
The idea of Kai in teddy bear pjs just poped into my mind when i read that last sentence...this of course, caused me to keel over with laughter.
| mary chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
I hope you update soon
| SilverArtist13 chapter 24 . 12/31/2006
You are WAY to critic! This fic was good. You keep blabbering about how bad it is, and you will scare all readers away! I read this just now, and I think it was great! Keep up teh good work :D
| DancerInTheDark101 chapter 24 . 12/18/2006
hay, just finished the story. LOVED IT! it was great right from the very beginning! i have read a story like it, but then again, not a lot of stories are completely original these days. keep the writing up, you dont suck at it. i think you're really good.
thanks for the great story.
See yaz later
| dranzerhilary chapter 22 . 7/15/2006
this review is the best ...gonna wright more reviews like this?
| Fia No. ONE BEYBLADE FAN chapter 24 . 6/22/2006
AMAZING! Really great story, I absolutely loved the parts where peoples arms or legs or whatever got ripped up. One of the best, I can tell you, and I normally HATE romance stories, but even they were okay in this one. Next time, Ray had better be one of the main characters, GOT THAT? That would be all, bye now!
| purpleeyednekoyoukai chapter 24 . 3/11/2006