|Reviews for The Mathematician's Premise|
| Shadow of Flame chapter 1 . 5/20
I just re-read this after reading "Pillar of Truth" and I'm still quite confused as to how that is a prequel to this. The only connection so far was Petunia's line "how do you kill something that isn't alive?" Furthermore, in Pillars Harry buys Number 4 and wards it, with Albus unaware, and I cannot see the Hermione who so boldly dedicated herself to Harry's cause forgetting him.
"Pillars" not withstanding, if Harold James was the baby in magical stasis, and Clayton Evans the stillborn Lily re-animated/made a golem from (which, wouldn't re-animating a body be a zombie, and a golem made of other materials? ), why was the BWL named Harry Potter? Shouldn't he have been named Clayton?
| Jadzia chapter 1 . 3/11
Interesting premise and well done with the descriptions. I liked this a lot.
| lovelydrarrylover chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
That was so cutely odd.
| yamiduke13 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
This was very well done. I think you did a great job with it.
| TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Ahahahaha feeeelllsssss *sobs* This is an extremely fascinating premise; Harry-who's-not-really-Harry is a golem that survives off of love. And destroying the Dark Magic that bound Voldemort's soul to this plan of existence caused everyone to revert to the state they possessed before they were ruined by his influence. ...Somehow that seemed a little less complicated in the reading. In any case, this was magnificently written. :D
| moodysavage chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Oh wow...that made me cry. Beautifully done.
| NCIS FTW chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
| Azrael Jinsei chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Please write more soon. Thank you.
| WereBunny87 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Oh mani loved this! Nicely done!
| Ugch chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
This story might have been interesting if you hadn't seen fit to add an obnoxious OC character no one wants to read about...
| kotaband60 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Is there more :( he's not soulless :(
| Sivy chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
great fic would love to see what happens after! Either way, the fic as is, is great
| Taikarath chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Good story, well written and very interesting idea. Thank you!
| One of the Colorless chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
So where DID Harry Potter (the new one) come from?
| EmmaRandomAs chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
awesome story! i love it! congrats on a job well done!