Reviews for Travellers of the Night
A2463 chapter 27 . 5/5/2012
Love it! Please continue!
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 27 . 4/9/2008
Wow! Very 'bloody brilliant', as Spike from the Buffy the Vampire Slayer TV series would say.

Keep up the awesome, lovely work, as always.
Currently Defunct chapter 25 . 12/10/2007
Those plague rats are rather pesky, aren't they? It makes me think of the Simpsons Halloween episode "Scary Tales." "Ugh, I just got OVER the plague!"

Wow, your narrator sounds a little bit bitter.
Currently Defunct chapter 24 . 11/9/2007
This is really funny! The only thing I would fix is that you sometimes switch tenses. Just avoid it in the future.
katie chapter 19 . 3/29/2006
hey! poor alestair... i can imagine that it must be hard for him to cope. wow this chapter was quite long not that im complaining or nething its a gd thing but it ust means that it takes longer for me to read it lol :D a gd chapter... but i prefer the ones with Rafael :D lol katie x
katie chapter 18 . 3/29/2006
hey it is me again and i have finally got around to reading this chapter! lol... ok well this certainly explains a lot, about Lucinda and Dorothea and vampirism in the sense of ur story... oh and who the guy in her dreams is... i think im still voting for Rafael tho she shud be the one to turn her! :D lol katie x
dangerousdame chapter 3 . 2/24/2006
Ah, Carmilla. It's good to see someone else who knows her story- and your writing shines through. Well done.
Katie chapter 17 . 2/16/2006
hey its me! lol i finally got round to reading this chapter, i have to admit i feel sry for poor Johnathan! and Misko it was a bit annoying the way that he kept calling Johnathan 'my friend' but i guess thats coz of the time that he was from... any way a good chapter! :D keep it up! x
Vitoria Morris chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
Great story! I like the encoorperation of Carmilla. Also, you have a strong and unique voice. Cheers!
katie chapter 16 . 1/24/2006
ah! that makes some things SO much clearer... im lookin forward to the story... i was wondering wen we would find out the deal wiv lucinda. aww rafael bless him. hm i like the idea of the diff types of vampires and that explains why Rafael call camilla the 'cat' hm... onto the next chapter! lol oh n im please to read that she didn't kill them... lol
katie chapter 15 . 1/23/2006
man she's a bit slow! i can't believe she still thinks the guy who visits her AT NIGHT is in her DREAM! *shakes head* altho i have to admit the first line made me smile! 'Since I have met this Rafael, I have been so happy' aww bless her. and i could see that they were goin to be caught. i mean Camilla isn't stupid! hmm wonder wot happens to them... aww and shes goin out with Rafael on her birthday! hehe :D katie x
katie chapter 14 . 1/22/2006
aww Rafael i LOVE i way that u write him to talk. i LOVE 2 lines this one 'O, such spirit! No one ever challenges me!' hehe it made me smile and this one 'Ah, I still have it.' this one is more typical for a guy! lol and as u already no i am a big fan of his! :D katie x
katie chapter 13 . 1/22/2006
aww u see u no me way to well ur rite i do like misko especially this line 'Misko: We all make mistakes' hehe aww i hope u gets the girl altho knowing how u like johnathan he will. *cries* neways i like the fact that u set this out in a script like way, it makes it different and obviously because there practically dead its gd. ok so im not sure if that made sense but i know wot i mean! :D katie x
MelancholyEcho chapter 3 . 1/20/2006
i liked this chapter also, except for some reason i feel as if i have no idea what is going on, perhaps it shwill all unfold, well anyway i cant wait to read more! off to chappie 4! toodles then!
MelancholyEcho chapter 2 . 1/20/2006
I liked this chapter, i like it how Rapheal is arogent without being a complete snob, anywhore, i like how its in 1st person like youve dipped into his mind instead of being an outside narrator...anyway...thank you for your reviews...yes erotic fiction is my calling ::bows:: i cant wait to see what that sick mind of yours has instore for this story! and yes i have been pictureing gerard butler this whole chapter... :D toodles!
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