|Reviews for Aijou: The Time of Change|
| fan-freak121 chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
please continue Veneratio: you haven't done it in four years please continue
| SeaweedBrainVon chapter 10 . 3/26/2009
I totally love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
| Snush chapter 10 . 9/24/2008
Can't wait for Naruto to make his big entrance!
Update soon :3
| nobody-nobody-nobody chapter 10 . 7/2/2008
I don't know if you're still interested in updating this story, but I have to say that your intent is brilliant. You've led the story into an entirely original direction. If I had any criticism to say at all, it may be that Sasuke's character seems almost entirely changed, although that could also be due to the fact that he's older. However, I find it hard to imagine that he can mature so quickly. I've only seen a couple of Shippuden episodes though, so I'm probably missing out on a lot.
Anyway, you've got a good grasp of words and an engaging story telling style. Overall, very good.
| ThisAccountHasBeenMoved chapter 10 . 2/3/2008
You said that you would update this in a week, but its been a little over 2 yrs! Did you quit this story?
| boowho2u chapter 10 . 1/7/2008
REAALY good story so far. The way it's writen is really amazing.
I can't wait for Naruto to show up. Some how I get this pic in my head of him showing up in some loud, random way like Anko did during the chunnin tests. ROFLMAO! . THAT would be pretty neat. :)
Are we going to learn more about Sasuke soon? 'cuz I'm kinda wondering if he turns out less "high and might" in this story.
Will Harry have to deal with his "family" ((Aunt and Uncle)) next summer? Or will he finally be free of them now that he's a full fleged wizard?
My last question... ((this was getting kinda longer than I wanted it to be .;)) Will others at Hogwarts learn about the Sharian (sp) in some weird "all powerfull" way or will Harry end up showing them?
| toastnchips chapter 10 . 11/15/2007
wo i loved this story i was highly dissaoointed when i got to the end of this chapter and noticed there wasn't another one for me to read
so i'll be looking forward to your next chapter
| Silent-Serpent chapter 10 . 11/3/2007
This is really interesting, and I hope you decide to continue it soon! _
| Raven Hufflepuff chapter 10 . 9/24/2007
I like this one.
| WithinThePoetsShadow chapter 10 . 8/10/2007
I love it but you REALLY need a Beta. Not so much in the first few chapters but in the lat 2 or 3, you do.
| weepingphoenix101 chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
This story is soo awesome, I'm breathless. Please update, I found this through MNI
| deathgod-121 chapter 10 . 7/2/2007
omg i cant believe how well this story is(no offense, i think it is absolutely wonderfull)i think it is well thought through and i like how you give a great description for everything so that no one gets lost in all of the action. though at times it is a little much to take in if you catch my drift. i cant wait to read more of it though, it seems interesting that you would harry the sharingan, the only thing i still sort of dont understand it: do sasuke and crew still do jutsus? cause i know you said they arnt really ninjas to begin with so is it only sasuke who can do the "wandless magic" or are the hand seals still usible in sasuke's world? oh and i cant wait to see what you are going to do with naruto. the whole time in the fic i have been wondering when you were going to introduce him, im so glad it wont be long until he makes his grand entrance.
anyways i look forward to the next instalment and keep it up!
| AkiraOfTheNight chapter 10 . 6/3/2007
It's kinda sad to know that you haven't updated since 2005 but I hope to take an interest intothis story again and start updating it again. Please think about it as it is one of the best stories I've ever read!
| LoneI chapter 10 . 4/24/2007
Couple issues with this story. Number one, you need to not trudge through boring things. Like shopping lists, lists of what's in vaults, and so forth. That information can be presented in much more interesting ways than you just listing it off. Just jump into a scene of Harry reading the list in bed or something, summarize the unimportant stuff, and keep the stuff of actual interest to a maximum count of one or two. Don't mention every minor event involved, like grabbing trunks and using portkeys, and instead tell a story using narrative techniques like simply starting when the characters are already in the middle of a situation that's actually interesting. I realize you like shopping, okay that's fine, but you took it a bit far with the absurdly long list of stuff and didn't actually say anything interesting about shopping, aside from contributing toward another fault that this fic is skirting: the superhero problem. You know the kind of fic I'm talking about: "...And so he trained in kenjutsu, ninjutsu, genjutsu and taijutsu, realized that Hermione was right and bought some history books, and also happened to look in the mirror and contemplate how to improve his sense of style." Somehow you've managed to be a lot more subtle about it than other people, so I didn't stop reading on half way through and continued to enjoy the fix, but all that stuff was there. Yes, I do enjoy the idea of Harry being a badass, but it's not actually satisfying when the change comes about so absurdly easy.
So in summary: more story, less lists, and stop breathlessly treating everything as an excuse to better Harry.
| Sara chapter 10 . 4/24/2007
Your story is good, wonderful, superb... (I lake words...)
so thank you very much because I enjoy reading it a lot, and please, keep writing!