|Reviews for Living with Your Heart|
| Fire Kitsune chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
PLEASE REWRITE THIS WHOLE STORY. I am in love with your plot, but not with how it's written! It is so hard to read.
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/10/2012
. ! I love in this one how at the end, You did little flash back pieces. I love it when I suddenly have Those flash backs...I can also relate When Kurama's sad that Kagome only likes him as a step brother...I have that experience on my friend 'cause I use to like him... And now, I'll stop talking Bye!
| magic sky daddy chapter 14 . 9/27/2010
lol, Naraku has lots of parts...
| LilFoxyLady chapter 7 . 6/30/2010
u need to have kurama eh suichi eh WHATEVER HIS NAME IS TELL THE TRUTH SO KAGOME CANT STOP ACTING LIKE A DUMBASS ARRRRRRRFRRRRRGH *gives u a glare worse then fluffys(coughs)sesshomarus*
i rememeber the first time i banged my head on a wall continusly 50 times than i passed out *looks wistful*
| kaori and yoshi chapter 17 . 3/23/2010
when you talk of the future after the fic is finished it is considered an epiloge without a sequel. (aka:a special chapter) i love the story! the food fight was so cool!
| BloodOozesLikeAStreamOfRed chapter 17 . 3/9/2010
this story was so good i loved it
from:Ryoga loves Akane
| sofi'schoice chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
terrible grammer- it ruins the story
more telling than showing
I'd guess you're a teen or younger from your style of writing. Wait a few years and take advantage of your english classes to advance your diction. Its a good plot, you have a good sense of imagination. I just feel that you have a poor way of portraying it. Work on your grammer, it was the biggest distraction.
| seidaradannayahoo.com chapter 7 . 6/18/2009
shizuru-kuwabaras older sister
| seidara danna chapter 3 . 6/18/2009
um kurama? as in yoko?
| kittyclaws chapter 3 . 6/7/2009
HIEI even though the story is complete i'm just sayin who i want to win the pairings -
i also have another idea for another story though i'm not sure about thee title
a girl named shikon is the reincarnation of a goddess of wishes she was put under a spell to sleep untill her soul mate kissed her whenever her mate was in trouble still asleep she would appear close to him and protect him
description:silver hair with purple, red and blue streaks purple eyes with silver streaks. full purple lips a musical voice and of course she controls ALL the elements oh and when shikon was kissed by her soulmate it would take about a week to wake up but when she does hiei is supposed to feel drawn to her...when i finish my idea i'll give the rest i'm not exactly done yet i really really hope you can write a fanfic about this! arigato!
these are the pairings i hoped would be in the story
kurama/lyana (lyana is shikons bff)/youko
kuwabara/ his kittens( oh god PLEASE no romance for this ew)
by the way my names maya -.-
| Lisa chapter 2 . 1/27/2009
| loretta537 chapter 17 . 11/15/2008
this was a great story
| Ala chapter 16 . 8/31/2008
dunno if you care, but i thought you should know. In chp 16, Kagome refferred to Suuichi as Kurama twice though no one said anything about them being the same person. It was rather confusing.
| seidara lee chapter 17 . 3/18/2008
that was so funny and sweet.
| seidara lee chapter 2 . 3/17/2008
thats just sick a kurama kagome pairing come on half siblings thats just plain sick! and i vote for hiei kagome.