Reviews for The LCL effect
u dont want to know chapter 7 . 5/8/2004
What the fuck.
ST Pika chapter 7 . 5/8/2004
Good chapter, can't wait for the next one. Loved the cliffhanger ending.
NefCanuck chapter 7 . 5/7/2004
LOL poor Shinji... what he wouldn't give for the ability to dissapear right now eh?
MyWay chapter 6 . 4/20/2004
this story is great. keep up with this good work. if you need help or something, feel free to ask...
!GREAT STORY!
nicknack chapter 6 . 4/19/2004
Excellent story. Looking forward for your next update.
Couple of suggestions for the next chap:
-If you don't want this story to be R- rated, keep on with the humor and less explicit stuff.
-We all know how does Asuka thinks on over-jealuosy-mode(regarding a certain wimp): either he's with the other 2 "stooges" or with a certain albino femme... therefore she sets herself on a manhunt...
It would spoil your story to make only one of them get him... what about if he manages to survive them once more, or both of them agree to cooperate.(Friendly suggestion, nuttin'more)
As a proud memmber of the XY chromosome pack I symphatize with you man... seek some advice on your woes...
roflecoptorroxxor chapter 4 . 4/19/2004
I really love this story. It is so funny! I wish I had some LCL! HAHAHA!
phantom reviewer chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
RUN BOY RUN! lucky devil... i wouldn't run... heh heh heh _
bsdisaster chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
(*rolling on floor laghing*) this is great, especially rei with her typical interest in books. good work
Third Attack of B-side chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
"Click!"
Beautiful. Great so far, but spelling needs a little work.
Soldierstar chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Fan-fik is guud, keepe up wurking ohn it...and whut so worng uh-bout gramer?
Bob chapter 6 . 4/13/2004
that's "fate"... not "fait"... ack... really its a good story... but the spelling... oh... the horror!
ps: chicks dig proper grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Is that why you got burned?
azurewind chapter 4 . 4/12/2004
first off:“I really didn‘t want to piss off the hard core fans. But don’t worry you‘ll have your chance.
ST Pika chapter 6 . 4/12/2004
Another good chapter, whatever will happen to poor Shinji- will he be able to get out or not? And what about Asuka? I guess I'll have to wait like everyone else for the answers to those questions...
Hououza chapter 6 . 4/11/2004
Very nice chapter!
As a guy myself not much advice I can offer in the other regard, sorry.
Hope it works out.
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza
shinji the good sharer chapter 6 . 4/11/2004
nice chapter, needs to be little longer but still good.
ikari shinji
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