|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Time of Learning|
| Stratre chapter 3 . 7/9
every letter has those horrid structures
| Stratre chapter 1 . 7/8
the structure of the letters in this was horrid man \
| Drew86419 chapter 9 . 6/11
Your writing style is truly terrible but I will read it still because I love Honks
| MyRandomName chapter 15 . 9/15/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
wow you managed to make it sound like snape has been telling the truth the entire time...whiny spoiled brat potter reared his head big time in this chapter.
| HoosierCullen chapter 15 . 2/25/2013
I love this fic and hope you write more of it. The story is very good and I like the way you have done the progression of Harry's powers and skill. The relationship with Tonks is very fun to read and seems good for Harry. Their feelings for one another seem to be getting stronger and building to more love for one another than just a very strong need to care for eachother. The Ron Hermione relationship is a big let down. Hermione being ditzy over Ron who is a pain in the books makes him seem too OOC. The fact they conveniently forgot to tell Harry they were together and then Ron was going on vacation with Hermione and her parents but Harry is okay with it didn't feel right when I read it. In my opinion you had Harry forgive them too easily and too quickly, my opinion and not saying you were wrong. Them as a couple is pushing Harry more to being alone and Hermione certainly would not have done that to Harry. Any way engough brow beating. I love the story and think it is very good and worth continuing.
| whatweareafreaidof chapter 4 . 4/26/2012
harry the one acting jealous, maybe there a good reason for what they did.
| Goldrune09 chapter 14 . 10/13/2011
loved the small lemon scene! hated the cliffhanger!
| Goldrune09 chapter 5 . 10/13/2011
Tnoks wasn't joking when she said "For you, always"...huh. Hope for some smut/lemon next chapter!
| Bum man homless in disguise chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
i loved it but you should of put p.s profesor snape
| Joe Lawyer chapter 10 . 1/29/2011
I know this story hasn't been updated since 2005, but I really have to tell you or other readers perhaps that this chapter was fantastic. I've read a lot of HP fanfiction and I cannot recall a more frank and enlightening discussion on the advantages and disadvantages of Harry's fame, given by Dumbledor. So often Harry painfully avoids the limelight, even when it could be a great boon to him. His scar represents the love and sacrifice of his parents and he should be proud of that. And most importantly, with the life Harry's led, why shouldn't he reap the benefits of his notoriety in money, privileges, and sexually (lol) with as many admirers as he can handle.
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 15 . 1/27/2011
We never did learn the mystery of the Gringotts letter, and Dumbledore didn't really answer the question about why so much scar pain. Given five years without an update, I guess we're never going to learn those answers.
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 13 . 1/26/2011
Another over-the-top reaction by Harry. 'Creature' was obviously intended to be generically descriptive, not derogatory, therefore a polite correction would have been more suitable to the situation.
The colloquialism you were wanting is 'last straw', as in 'straw that broke the camel's back', not 'last draw'.
Sirius's middle name is Orion.
Considering Dumbledore's sexual preference, Dobby's name for him is an LOL moment.
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 11 . 1/26/2011
While it feels good to see Harry telling off everybody, especially Dumbledore, and also Dumbledore bluntly telling Harry everything he ever really wanted to know, it also seems quite unrealistic. It also seems unrealistic for Tonks to 'encourage' Harry by giving him a blowjob so soon in their relationship. Maybe you should change the genre from Adventure/Romance to Fantasy/Romance.
I think Harry's reaction to Ron and Hermione not telling him they were an item was pretty over-the-top. Even more so when he blamed Dumbledore for interfering with his own ability to romance Hermione, since he never had any intention of doing so in the first place. I don't think he needs to be quite that belligerent in order to stand up for himself and make his feelings known. As written, it makes it seem like he's reacting more out of jealousy of Ron than merely feeling uninformed and neglected by people he still considers to be his friends.
| monbade chapter 15 . 1/3/2011
good story, to bad its dead