|Reviews for Toil and Trouble|
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 5 . 5/6/2012
Wow, this chapter is good. I really liked it, the writing style was nice as always in your story and the characters were veryin character. I wouldn't be surprised if J.K. Rowling wrote it herself! Keep writing because this is a very good story now, and could be a succesful one if you keep uploading. :D
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 3 . 5/6/2012
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
James is so in character and this describes his thoughts on Lily and why he doesn't give up to great detail and sense. Bravo!
| thestaganddoe chapter 5 . 4/25/2012
| may-bell-rose chapter 5 . 9/7/2011
I think this is the last of your L/J ones I hope you finish this one starting out so good :)
Loved reading all your HP work good luck with future stories
| reader chapter 5 . 2/9/2011
I really liked your story! But why don't you complete it? Please do, I'm almost dying to know what will happen next! Thanks!
| gottaloveJamesPotter chapter 5 . 7/8/2010
aaahhh! whats the idea? please update soon!
| Moresmiles chapter 5 . 6/18/2010
MORE! If you do not write more I will loath you as much as lilly does James
| AccountDeletePlease chapter 5 . 4/26/2009
I like the Sirius part.
That was funny.
I liked the James's diary part too. It was hilarious.
| roses aren't red chapter 5 . 1/25/2009
You're an evil, evil, evil, evil person to end it here.
| raindrop's n' roses chapter 5 . 7/18/2008
sweet! I love fanfics about lily and james. You can practicly just make it up as you go!
| Sunny chapter 5 . 1/14/2008
Oh! An IDEA? Update - I wanna know what Remus's idea is!
And the lily/sirius thing was hilarious - loved the Look of Death, Destruction, And Other Unpleasant Things
| Sunny chapter 4 . 1/14/2008
Ha! I bet it will...
| The Untimely Demise of Kitten chapter 5 . 8/13/2007
omg! This fic is totally amazing and hilarious and I can't believe it was last updated in 2004! Oh, life is so unfair.
| suprise2432 chapter 5 . 8/10/2007
you should probably update it. because it's great. :)