Reviews for It's Just the Stupid Rain |
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![]() ![]() A nice story, but 'kudasai' generally means 'have' in Japanese. 'Onegai' is a more direct translation of 'please', with 'shimasu' said afterwards meaning a sign of politeness. Other than that, there was no grammar mistakes that I could see, but I am unsure because English is not the language I generally speak. . . Please continue to pursue your passion of writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing storry! all the character were completing NOT OOC. if hiei and botan ever (which im still hoping that maybe the creators of yu yu hakusho will make a ova of hiei and botan getting together) get together this is how i would imagine that would go. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMIKAMI THAT WAS SO KAWAII! YAY HIEI/BOTAN FLUFF! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is sweet! Thought I'm not really a fan of this couple, it's impossible not to notice how sweet it was. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the cuteness. Great job. _ |
![]() ![]() Oh my God, that was the most awsome thing that I have ever read. You RULE! |
![]() ![]() oh my god that was so beatiful he was all like and she was all lkie liking him and stuff and i don't know what i'm saying |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh... HB goodness! I absolutely love this fic! I hope you write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked it but hiei was so OC. but at least this story had an explaination as to why hiei was OC. But that's not the point i loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() (blink, blink) wow ... that was different. it's very cool, though! i really like it! i hope to read more great fics by you soon! (goes off in search of more fics by author) |
![]() ![]() Kawaii... _ HB is the best! Hope you'll keep doing HB fanfics in the future! It is really a nice work! Gambatte! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY!LOVE IT ! DON'T HATE IT! WHOOHOO! 11 OUTTA 10! Oh whoops. Excuse my sudden outburst. Very good I like it. Now um could you please review for my story? Its Fox and Wolf romance or Humor in umm R please review. Thank you and buh bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was sweet. I never really thought of the idea of Botan and Hiei. |
![]() ![]() That was really sweet! I hope you write more stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! That was soo cute! This is my first HB to to read! |