Reviews for The Protege
ChCR chapter 13 . 3/9/2017
Love your story! :-)
PrincessOfUnderworld chapter 13 . 6/20/2016
Salut je vien de finir la fic et wahou ! Elle est super très émouvante. ...juste elle est classé dans les fic pas finie donc attention j'ai failli la loupé lors de ma recherche de fanfition
Guest chapter 13 . 5/6/2016
Sevlindam36yaho chapter 13 . 10/11/2015
Sigh... I discovered this fic and movie so late man. A review took this long for a story 11 years ago. I watched the movie today for the first time. It was so touching and amazing that could have a better ending. Leon deserve a better ending. I'm so glad I got to read this fic, maybe you won't read this review of mine at all. But I just want to say thank you so much because I just want to see them with happy ending, cause I'm so freaking optimist about everything t-.-t I give up, I just can't bare to see favorite characters. Therefore I'm so glad that FanFiction is an outlet for such heated emotion within me.
A family is what they deserve. Wish I can write something like you do. But I have limited talent on creativity.
Wow I've babbling for so long man. Anyway I wish you would write more about this pairing, but again I'm 11 years too late...sigh... Oh well this fic here is a gold mine anyway. :D
Guest chapter 3 . 6/28/2015
in the movie Matilda rides in a shuttle from New York city to an island still in Ny where the school is.. LOL I just drove past that area in NYC and freeked when I relised it was from the movie..
OuroborosMM chapter 13 . 9/11/2014
I can't believe I only found this fic now, 10 years later!
Beautifully written and so emotional! This story would have been the perfect sequel to the movie.
Thank you so much for writing this wonderful piece!
eineinein chapter 13 . 5/8/2014
100th review!

let me tell you that this is my favorite fic of all the other 40 in this category! stellar writing, smooth storyline, awesome plot, you did so very well! i love it! just finished crying out my eyes after watching leon the professional, but this fic lessened the blow, a bit. i love this! keep writing :)
Gravity Fair chapter 13 . 9/8/2013
This was amazing. Every once in a while I'll watch a favorite movie of mine or read a favorites book and it'll get me wondering: has someone written a fanfic about this? Especially if the ending if gut wrenching and full of exquisite despair. Leon was one of those movies that I watched today and I just thought someone must have written something. A story where Leon doesn't die. Then I found this! But I have to admit I was disappointed once I got to chapter 13 and realized it was an epilogue. My heart is in pieces. I wanted more interaction between them. Maybe an eventual kiss at least. Sighhhh... But ah well. You wrote this story a long time ago (nearly 10 years!) and it was a very sweet and wonderful ending. Thank you so so sooo much for writing this! I love you! Keep writing! I'm on my way now to see what else you've written.

Aliens ate my brains chapter 13 . 6/26/2013
You should have been in charge of making the movie! :D This is soooo much better! Thank-you for a wonderful story! Have you thought about writing another one maybe?! I don't know more "um cough" risky? If you catch my drift?! :D
Matt chapter 13 . 8/13/2012
Thanks, this is great, i can help but feel emotionally attached to the movie so the ending is too hard and even though its my favorite movie of all time i hardly ever watch when i do i can imagine an ending like this. Thanks
CallMeSweetie chapter 13 . 7/5/2012
Wow. Thank you for giving them the happy ending they should have gotten in the first place. Wish there were more fics like this.
rhain572 chapter 13 . 10/30/2011
Wonderful story, and I agree, they did deserve a happy ending, but I can't see either of them settling down with children. Matilda is too young and restless, and Leon just doesn't mesh well with the whole family thing. I think that their 'happy ending' would probably be more along the lines of them forming the best 'cleaning' company in Italy, or something like that.
cybersteel5780 chapter 13 . 10/13/2011
Very interesting story. I liked!
TFFyeah chapter 13 . 4/24/2011
Thaaaank you for writing what I think should be the sequel! I loved it all! The story, your writing, the ending... ) THUMBS UP!
Harland White chapter 13 . 11/9/2010
By the way, for anyone who doesn't find Leon's survival possible: There was a man named Jim Lucas who was a marine in WW2. He was the youngest man to earn the Medal Of Honor when he threw himself on 2 grenades. He managed to bury one before they exploded and he survived-to serve again in the Korean War. His story was told in the book "Indestructable".

Also, it is quite possible to survive a direct gunshot wound to the head as well. Google it, you'll find several examples and news articles about people who have. Leon's survival, while somewhat unlikely, was indeed possible.
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