|Reviews for Toxic sweetness|
| David Fishwick chapter 28 . 9/2/2008
Cool idea and please update soon thanks.
| Peacheschica chapter 28 . 8/6/2007
PLEASE update this story! it is such a great story and desreves to be finished with a proper ending!
| Chia89 chapter 28 . 6/4/2007
please finish the story
| midget chapter 28 . 6/1/2007
this is really gd...plz carry on with it...i NEED to no what happens.
| snigglesaurus chapter 28 . 9/22/2006
Wow, another excellent Ginny/Draco story.
You're really in need of a beta, though.
| Lil Bell chapter 28 . 3/21/2006
I love this story ... BUT please UPDATE its been so long
| Mishavay chapter 28 . 2/14/2006
Fairly well written. Other then small grammer mistakes (and i am really not one who should be talking about grammer) i really enjoyed your story.
| Kari M. Black chapter 7 . 8/25/2005
Yay, Draco's B-day is the day after mine (In this fic anyway)!
| yellow notepaper chapter 13 . 8/24/2005
“He went to the boys toilets to splash some clod water on his face. He looked about ready to Eat Malfoy.” Ron replied. “I mean don’t get me wrong, I hate Malfoy with a passion, but I don’t tink he deserves to be eaten by Seam”
clod cold, I presume
Eat capitalized when it shouldn't be
Tink lol I love this word, but I dont think its in the proper context.
Just trying to help you out here
| yellow notepaper chapter 10 . 8/24/2005
this is fairly good so far, some spelling errors and Draco can be a bit OOC, but nothing's perfect. (except the actual HP series, lol) I would suggest a beta (ahem, me, ahem) to just tune it up a little. One thing that made me do a double take - Lucius Malfoy? Being nice to his son? And calling Voldemort by his actual name insted of the Dark Lord? Anyways, keep writing, and drop me an email if u need a beta. lol byebye
| starscollide chapter 28 . 7/10/2005
i love your sotry ive been reading it for a while...
i cant wait to read the new chapter update!
| mar chapter 28 . 6/27/2005
i love it!
update soon please!
| chunky-01 chapter 28 . 6/17/2005
that was heaps good plz update soon!
| Emily chapter 28 . 6/8/2005
omg you have the most amazing writing ability ...i cant wait for your next story
| Neca chapter 28 . 6/1/2005
quite cool. can't wait the next chap.