Reviews for Toxic sweetness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cool idea and please update soon thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE update this story! it is such a great story and desreves to be finished with a proper ending! |
![]() ![]() AA-AARG! please finish the story |
![]() ![]() this is really gd...plz carry on with it...i NEED to no what happens. midget |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, another excellent Ginny/Draco story. You're really in need of a beta, though. UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story ... BUT please UPDATE its been so long |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fairly well written. Other then small grammer mistakes (and i am really not one who should be talking about grammer) i really enjoyed your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, Draco's B-day is the day after mine (In this fic anyway)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() “He went to the boys toilets to splash some clod water on his face. He looked about ready to Eat Malfoy.” Ron replied. “I mean don’t get me wrong, I hate Malfoy with a passion, but I don’t tink he deserves to be eaten by Seam” clod cold, I presume Eat capitalized when it shouldn't be Tink lol I love this word, but I dont think its in the proper context. Just trying to help you out here |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is fairly good so far, some spelling errors and Draco can be a bit OOC, but nothing's perfect. (except the actual HP series, lol) I would suggest a beta (ahem, me, ahem) to just tune it up a little. One thing that made me do a double take - Lucius Malfoy? Being nice to his son? And calling Voldemort by his actual name insted of the Dark Lord? Anyways, keep writing, and drop me an email if u need a beta. lol byebye ~Erin |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your sotry ive been reading it for a while... i cant wait to read the new chapter update! |
![]() ![]() i love it! update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was heaps good plz update soon! |
![]() ![]() omg you have the most amazing writing ability ...i cant wait for your next story |
![]() ![]() ![]() quite cool. can't wait the next chap. |