|Reviews for Forgotten|
| ACE329 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Absolutely beautiful and haunting. I could practically FEEL the dream, you know? I could feel the pain of the sand, the heat, the stabbing emotions of fear and humiliation (when the Pharaoh was laughing at him..) and then suddenly I can understand for a split second what makes Bakura tick. I can understand why he's so messed up, and it becomes painfully obvious that these dreams are driving him to a slow and almost inevitable insanity. But then there's the Ryou factor, who comes to his rescue...so at least there's that faint glimmer of hope. Anyway, I love your work and as I said, this is beautiful.
| Nostalgic5947 chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Wow, that was intense!
Hey, I know this is weird, but this line: "Suddenly I'm seeing the pharaoh, dark and flashing in the crow's mouth, and he's laughing too, laughing like he was when he finally had me pinned down to a table, screaming and writhing and choked with tears and vomit and saliva and blood, desperate and terrified and hating and hopeless... " It gave me a really interesting scene that I'd like to use in a YGO story I'm working on. Do you mind if I use it? I'll credit of course!
| RikaNipah chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Oh my god, this was a powerful fic. Very good.
| Angeliz chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
I love it. It's simplisticly haunting.
| Sapphire Dragons chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
wow! i really like that! ryou's protectiveness was nice.. and bakura's dream was perfectly freaky!
| QueenOfGames2 chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
::happy twitch:: haha another person like Bakura... hehe LIKE ME! AH! :pats you on the back: Good nightmare... (hmm I think thats an oxymoron but anyways like I was saying) It was simple enough to make you think 'eh not all that scary' but when you really look at it, the bloody thing is a complete... well nightmare! ::claps hands:: nice job nice job... uh yea question... is this a one shot? Beacuse uh yea if it is then I'm not going to say 'update when you get the chance' because then I would look stupid...
The *Queen Of Games*
| HumorNut chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
...actually more HUMAN than the rest of your fics that I've read so far... I like it
| SweetMisery1 chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
freaky but kewl
| kitten chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
very strange and interesting
| Carry On chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
Nice story. That dream does sound scary...
| Chi Yagami chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
I read it cause I'm a big Ryou Bakura fan, but its kinda confusing...