|Reviews for Fire|
| Olivia Gonzalez chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
Love this so much! So sad that you had to discontinue this with your other NallxRuby story. I was really getting into it! Lol but great job! :)
| res123 chapter 5 . 3/8/2013
Dear Sichan, Don't worry I not asking you to continue this story. I just wanted to write that this was vary sweet and I enjoyed it. And although this is not the best written story I have ever come across it is by far not the worst. And you can find what I am about to write on Nall Lunar Wiki. "Kai Shigema stated in an interview that the deaths of his friend's plunged him into a deep depression, which briefly lifted somewhere in the middle of the time between the two games when he became involved in an adventure that rivaled even the rise of the magic Emperor in it's importance in Lunar history. The details of this adventure have never been released in Lunar canon, However.
After his new friend's from this adventure grew old and died, much like those from Silver Star Story, Nall became even more depressed. At some point in the century before Eternal blue, Nall took up residence at the ruins of the Grindery, Now called Taben's Peak and formed his 'neverland' for orphan's surrounding himself by children so that he whould never be alone again." (Kai Shigema is the maker of the Luna game's.) So Nall has only been the leader of the dragon kid's for the past 100 year's. Not 800.
| Miyo chapter 5 . 10/31/2009
Ahh, well it's discontinued but I wanted to say a few words still. It was cute while it lasted, I admit that some sort of ending as a closure would have been nice but I guess it couldn't be helped. You had an adorable way of portraying Ruby and Nall and your idea of her human form sounds MUCH better than the official one (the form pictured in the art books). Thanks for sharing this story with us. ] It may never get an ending but I enjoyed reading it.
| Noc and NC chapter 4 . 2/7/2005
This is the first Lunar:EB fanfic that I have reveiwed and I have to say it's pretty awsome. I agree with you about the writer's block, that really sucks. But when ever I can't think of anything to write for a chapter, I just watch a lot of the show I'm writing on. Or play a lot of that game, since that is the case here. But then again I am easily amused and have a VERY low IQ so... mabey you shouldn't listen to what I say...! any ways, love the story, keep it up!
| Nakupenda Sana10 chapter 4 . 11/3/2004
OMG! I LOVE your FF! PLEASE write more soon!
| andrea chapter 4 . 11/1/2004
update ,puweez with a nally-poo on top . no, serious ,please update , i love where this is going.
| Reesechan chapter 4 . 8/19/2004
I love this! When is he gonna kiss her?
| Alex Warlorn chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
How often do love tri-angles happen in real life anyway?
Characters in character, check.
Real character interaction. Check.
Character development . . . we'll see.
| xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 4 . 7/10/2004
Excellent chapter! That whole scene w/Nall getting Ruby all soaked w/water was hilarious! Nall's such a pervert! Must've learned a few things from Kyle & Ronfar...LoL! Anyway, keep up the GREAT WORK & PLEASE CONTINUE A.S.A.P.! _
| Luna Chic799 chapter 4 . 7/9/2004
Awesome update! I
| Karana Belle chapter 4 . 7/9/2004
oh, please update soon! it would be so sad if you didn't! i just love this story! it was all so cute! can't wait for the next chapter!
| xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 3 . 7/4/2004
GREAT chapter! Aww, poor Nall...I feel so sorry for him! Anyway, great job w/the story so far & keep up the great work! PLEASE CONTINUE A.S.A.P.! _
| Story Weaver1 chapter 3 . 7/2/2004
YAY! I missed your writings. You have THE best author at writing RubyNall fics. You're better then me at least. I loved everything about this chapter, it was just so good.
| Luna Chic799 chapter 3 . 7/2/2004
Hey! _ I'm so glad you updated! I _ LoL NEwayZ, Nice job on the new chapter! Update soon! ;;
| Karana Belle chapter 3 . 7/2/2004
i think that we all love 'inflation of our egos'. i know i do! and thanks for putting spaces between the paragraphs, it makes it so much more enjoyable to read. well at least for me... i really loved all the Nall/Ruby moments. they were so cute! and Lucia and Hiro are back! can't wait until the next chapter, so please update soon. i was so estatic (is that how you spell it?) when i saw that you updated!