Reviews for Nitpicking
BigKwell chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
I've got to admit... it is SO Rally and May!
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Well written, but for something classified as humor it's pretty boring.
Dreamer chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Heh heh! Just one of those things! Like it!
Grimauldi chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
Thanks for giving me something enjoyable to read after an hour of crap. ::Thumbs up.:: Write more.
jamminbomb chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
Nice, well written. The characters were pretty well done, considering there were only 3 episodes and the manga to work with.
The Torch chapter 1 . 10/6/2004
I loved it. These fanfics really are getting rare. So many people think they can write and end up lowering the value if Gunsmith Cats. That's something I hate and will always report to the author. Yours rocked, though.
Section-Eight chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
Well, I suppose if anyone would be a gun-otaku, it would be her...

Clever concept for a quick laugh. Plus, you've written the dialogue such that absolutely anyone can get the joke without knowing a dang thing about GSC.
arrow-of-jane chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
I liked this story. I could picture this scene taking place, and like someone stated earlier, good GSC fics are in short supply. Thanks for the great read!
Ghost in the Machine chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Enjoyable little short piece. Good GSC stories of any variety are in short supply. When are you going to get back to Bar Tales?