Reviews for The Beginning
pianogal chapter 26 . 7/9/2005
well Paul had to be and idiot through half of that story but he finally woke up at the end and i'm glad. great job! I loved Michelle's character and the part at the end with the rain was great.

Jess420 chapter 26 . 4/25/2004
Amazing! I just LOVED this story! I didn't even know it exhisted until earlier tonight. I'm so glad that I read it! It's wonderful! You're a really good author! I can't wait for more from you, weather it's from this story or another one! They're ALL great!
Xtreme-Jewell chapter 12 . 4/20/2004
WOW! Great story! I'm excited to see more!
Jen105 chapter 12 . 4/20/2004
Great story so far. Can't wait to read the rest.