good fanfiction I like this one a lot

WWHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYY?! Why must your give me hope that all is well and them take away dumbldore?!

Your wrighting is so moving it had me in tears. I just wanted to say how much I enjoy your stories.

Thank you.

Something always bugs me about this chapter. During the hearing Harry swallows his answer about the Torq so as not to give Draco away, which is strange. Rick explains about the Torq before Draco arrives on the scene, just adding more details when Draco is there. Harry could have given a far more elaborate answer than he did. Also, he never dated two of Rick's exes. He dated one and had sex with another. This means that his answers should have been one and one, even if Tara was only around for two dates so far.

So far, this is incredibly written! I actually stumbled upon this looking for Drarry, but when I read about the plot - Snape adopting Harry - I couldn't resist sneaking a peak and now I'm stuck! Absolutely amazing! :D

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9/10. Didn't expect much from this genre of story, but it was a definite gripper and pAge turner.
Ty so much for writing and sharing it with us.

I don't know how I feel about who or how Harry lost his virginity.

I hope that Harry starts up a Parsletongue book or something. People that can talk to snakes probably turn dark because People hate them so much.

Wonderful story, very nicely planned out and written. Heading over to begin part two now!

(Am reviewing this chapter because I can't review chapter 10 twice)
So...you live in Ireland right? Why do I ask? No reason in particular *hides threatening objects behind back*. Unsublte threats aside, I really like what you're doing with this story and am estatic that you are including our favorite god with daddy-issues in the solution! Update soon...*knives behind back glint with errie light*

I like that. Voldemort dead, gone, and away. Easy. Hahha this story is pretty awesome.

Oh my goodness. Words cannot express how much I've loved reading this story. There's so many things I adored about it I can't even begin to list them all!

First of all, your writing is immense. It takes a massive amount of talent to weave original characters in with canon ones, and make them believable, interesting, and an essential part of the story.

This was simply one of the best character development stories I've ever read. The length was perfect- it progressed beautifully, was never dull and never rushed, but perfectly paced in a way which allowed both Harry and Snape to grow and explore through each other. Honestly, what a work of art!

I grew frustrated at times that there wasn't more Snape-Harry interaction, but also acknowledge their relationship was not the whole story. Somehow, when they did have time together. It made things all the more poignant, and all the more wonderful. The scene in your final chapters, with Harry asleep and everything coming 'full circle' so to speak, was an evocative example of this.

You've done such a brilliant, brilliant job here. Can't wait to read your other works! Thanks for sharing your talent xxx

Wow. What a beast of a tale. I can hardly fathom that this is the same story that I began with, with Harry trapped in the forest. It honestly feels like years have passed. Excellently done!

YOu did all the perfect thigns. All of them.

Harry looking in on Snape (liek Snape looked in on Harry)
Snape's attitude adjustment.
Sirius speaking to Harry in a dream
Snape then findign harry asleep in the library.
Snape gently initiatign a hug (there hasn't been enough hugging in this. AH, but it makes the few hugs so sweet)
Snape so absentmindedly saying that he loved Harry. I have been in that moment. I've let that slip before and I remember that moment of fear and it was so gorgeously captured.

This was.. perfect.

The ending, sweet, yet not final. Plenty of room for MORE... yet, not a gaping cliffhanger.

Perfect.

My only, only, only quibble was not the many chapters fo fluff-i LOVED THOSE- but the simple fact that this story was written so long ago. Snape's love of Lily is one of my favorite aspects of Snape... Of course, one that couldn't have been written, not at that time, no... it wans't there to be written in to the story... though it's one of those things that you look back at and seem to miss. BUt.. very minorly. Very minorly. 3

onwards to the next story :D

I try to make it a point to let an author know when they have moved me to tears, or other extremes of emotion.. this fic has been amazing and filled me with so many SQUEE moments... Harry telling Snape that he loved him, CCalling him Dad... many.. others.. but I think this sentence, right here, abuot killed me. "Only when she was right behind him, did she notice he was rocking forward and back slightly, keening faintly." Instant tears. Such a short, simple phrase. yet in 7 words, ther'es a perfect flash of image into harry's state of being. well done. Poor, Poor Harry...

You've also painted a fantastic little world in the details here. Even in the little details like a teacher quietly giving points to a house, as McGonagall did to Ginny in this chapter. It's such a silly thing to applaud, but it's one of those little details