Reviews for To Mend this Dream |
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![]() ![]() So sad to see such an amazing fic abandoned for over a decade :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmm. So far, I've really, really enjoyed the story. The only thing that I've found awkward thus far is that you change scenes without warning. Case in point: One moment Sakura is washing her face, then next, her mother is telling her about Lee. I honestly thought for a minute that someone was in her apartment with her, talking to her while she washed her face. Other than that, brilliant! Song |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey. I just recently came across your fic. Do you plan on continuing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your vast vocabulary and your use of language. I'm a fan of writers who can use a bevy of words without repeating an adjective or verb constantly. I enjoyed the comic relief about lighting a cigarette with her "Grand Fireball no Jutsu". |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'd really like to see more of your writing hereon fanfiction but I think that I'm just too optiistic. -.-U I'll watch you anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I read it way back when Rokudaime was still up, and decided to see if it was on here, too.. Yay. Please add more chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story! I'm so sad that it seems hopeless to hope for an update. If you ever get around to it though, I'm sure you would make a lot of people happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your writing style, and you have a lot of excellent plot twists. Please post the next chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wowza! This isa a sweet story! I will deffenitly read the next chapter when yo get it out! Yue |
![]() ![]() ![]() gotta finish reading tomorrow. ja~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() **gasp!** A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! UPDATE QUICKLY! Don't abandon this story! go kakashi/sakura ] please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Argh, as the world's biggest idiot, I apologize. I have way to many tabs open in Firefox at the moment, and I left my review in the wrong one. You were probably exceedingly puzzled by it . As soon as I plow through the stories in the other tabs, I shall leave a real review for this one. *kicks self* Why oh why does The Pit not have an edit or delete review option? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read the first six chapters of this, and I'm enjoying it immensely. You've written Kakashi with just the right blend of perversion, emotional fuckwittery, and self-deprecation, while still making him likable. I look forward to reading more of your Sakura as well. Also, yay for smut! It's nice to read an adult-rated story that has such a refreshingly fun yet adult attitude, instead of being fandom's answer to torrid Harlequin romance. I look forward to more :D |