Reviews for To Mend this Dream
songstar13 chapter 3 . 5/13/2012
Mmm. So far, I've really, really enjoyed the story. The only thing that I've found awkward thus far is that you change scenes without warning. Case in point: One moment Sakura is washing her face, then next, her mother is telling her about Lee. I honestly thought for a minute that someone was in her apartment with her, talking to her while she washed her face.

Other than that, brilliant!

Song
SapphireOrchids chapter 7 . 9/1/2011
Hey. I just recently came across your fic. Do you plan on continuing?
comicgrrl chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I like your vast vocabulary and your use of language. I'm a fan of writers who can use a bevy of words without repeating an adjective or verb constantly.

I enjoyed the comic relief about lighting a cigarette with her "Grand Fireball no Jutsu".
asianxsmartie chapter 7 . 4/29/2009
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CataclysmicallyTerrible chapter 7 . 5/3/2008
I'd really like to see more of your writing hereon fanfiction but I think that I'm just too optiistic. -.-U I'll watch you anyway.
slivblue chapter 7 . 4/15/2008
OMG please update!
Silent Uke Fuu chapter 7 . 4/10/2008
I love this story! I read it way back when Rokudaime was still up, and decided to see if it was on here, too.. Yay. Please add more chapters!
CharlotteHibiki chapter 7 . 12/1/2007
What a great story! I'm so sad that it seems hopeless to hope for an update. If you ever get around to it though, I'm sure you would make a lot of people happy.
H. Cow chapter 7 . 6/7/2007
I really like your writing style, and you have a lot of excellent plot twists. Please post the next chapter soon!
Yue-neko chapter 7 . 5/3/2007
Wowza! This isa a sweet story! I will deffenitly read the next chapter when yo get it out!

Yue
inuyashaHELP chapter 2 . 3/18/2007
gotta finish reading tomorrow. ja
MissAX chapter 7 . 2/14/2007
**gasp!** A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! UPDATE QUICKLY! Don't abandon this story! go kakashi/sakura ] please update!
YourLackOfDeletionOptionIsDumb chapter 2 . 2/1/2007
Argh, as the world's biggest idiot, I apologize. I have way to many tabs open in Firefox at the moment, and I left my review in the wrong one. You were probably exceedingly puzzled by it .

As soon as I plow through the stories in the other tabs, I shall leave a real review for this one. *kicks self*

Why oh why does The Pit not have an edit or delete review option?
YourLackOfDeletionOptionIsDumb chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
I just read the first six chapters of this, and I'm enjoying it immensely. You've written Kakashi with just the right blend of perversion, emotional fuckwittery, and self-deprecation, while still making him likable. I look forward to reading more of your Sakura as well.

Also, yay for smut! It's nice to read an adult-rated story that has such a refreshingly fun yet adult attitude, instead of being fandom's answer to torrid Harlequin romance.

I look forward to more :D
Sandri chapter 7 . 1/31/2007
It's wonderful. I loved every word.

You're a fantastic writer and I hope you continue.
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