Reviews for A day at Tsubasa School
RedeamMyself chapter 5 . 6/24/2007
this is really good, i hope you plan on more fics like these.
DBZKittykitty chapter 5 . 10/29/2006
That was SO cute! I loved it
Briememory chapter 5 . 8/5/2004
This was a really good story! I dont know why only 4 people reviewed, but this story is really funny!
wrayshine2 chapter 4 . 4/13/2004
_() you seem to have a slight problem with run-on sentences. Its a good idea to change up the length and type of sentences you use in your writing. This isn't exactly an original idea for a story, but the plot is fairly different. It reminds me of the cartoon Recess (the powerful pre-schoolers). There's one thing I never really understood about those little kid books. See the cat run. The picture doesn't show a cat running. It shows a cat posed as if it was in mid stride, but it isn't moving so it isn't really running...ah well.
fruity one chapter 2 . 4/5/2004
very amusing
teacher reminds me of the teacher from pokemon, on the kid's day episode.
keep it up!
My self chapter 1 . 3/31/2004
Interesting...but I didn't think 7 year-olds could be in love. This is AU right?
Goddess Shimi chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
Shimi:(huge Son grin)
HEE~~
ChibiTrunks:(blinks)
What's WITH her?
Shimi:I LUV chibi
Goku and Chibi Veggie.
(snirkers) I bet the teacher
has a REALLY hard time with
those two. YOU RULE!
JA NE!