I loved this story. Very different than other marriage law stories and I think including Severus in the plotting is realistic. Beautiful!

It’s lovely!

I loved this chapter! I have never read a story that has given me such a clear picture of what being in Snape's class would be like. I loved it! Such viciousness! Lol! It was great!

Thank you for a great read

Brilliant! *cackles* through the red mist.. :D

Aw. The romantic in me wants to see more of that story since they arrived at that point but its a rather nice ending and a beautiful slow burn all the way :) Im all for steamy fall in lust stories and all, but I fully and guiltily admit these tend to be occ ... Your characterisation of their relationship seems so much more likely in a rational pov, more human, more believable, light, funny, and angst free, its pretty refreshing ! That awkward first time was priceless, and all the platonic friendship at first and all. Brought together by witty Slytherin plotting, that was great , thks
-lylapalooza

Is there more?

I'm sad this story was abandoned. It was really going well.

So I finished this story.. again. I enjoyed it so much that I know I’ll retun to it again. I don’t know exactly haw many times I read it already, but it was worth it every time. Thank you, you are a wonderful writer. I wonder though if this is the end of the story, because it seems to have stopped here for a long time, and even if it seems like a end, a short epilogue still would have made sense.

I'm enjoying this story so much! I really hope you return to it soon. You write so well, and your characterizations are wonderful. Thanks for sharing your talents with us!

Subscribing in the hope that this wonderful and expertly written fic will be continued. Thank you for writing, Shiv :)

Yes, yes, yes! I do so love a slytherin Hermione and your writing style keeps making that slip into reverent admiration. I once tried reading a ss/hg marriage law that had a most remarkably docile Hermione Granger. About five chapters in I got fed up with the plotting and wished for this fic. I didn't get instant gratification but the journey was more fun anyway. I guess I do have to repeat that I really like your writing stye; the witty banter, nuanced social interactions, and understanding of political machinations do much for me.
I kind of regret binging on it so quickly, it will take awhile to find another.
May the muses favor you,
-Kip

Update please I love this

I hope you'll update this story ! I found it really interesting !

Ughhh, I'm gonna be running out of chapters soon. Wahhhh
Please come back and write some more.