|Reviews for Minutia|
| Phamtom of the Pie chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Gojyo is so genre savvy he breaks the fourth wall without even meaning too.
| darlingfox chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
I don't mind watching dramatics on manga & anime, but I always do wonder why they never go for the practical option... I'd love to see something like this happen in canon. XD
| brkstrtrcr chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Y'know, I always wondered why Hakkai had that penchant for chucking those damned things halfway across the page...
| Storm101 chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
I can see that. i can so see that. I need to stop giggling, but Gojyo's right. He's overly dramatic. i also love the "some vast invisible audience is counting" because I for one am... XD
god, this is amazing!
| UbiquitousPhantom chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
I can just picture Hakkai threatening them like that too.
| SxG L chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
OMG! Loved it! That was amazing! So many quotable lines that it would take way to long to tal about all of them! But the "vast, unseen audiance" part got me good! And the sand! Ha! Great visual! I always wondered about Hakkai's limiters too! Every time he drops the I think, "What if he can't remember where he dropped them? They're so small..." I know from experience! Awesome fic love!
| Clorinda chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
The "dramatic" effect business Gojyo pointed out was bang-on. Actually I *like* watching it happen, but this one was a pretty acute fic.
| RedBrunja chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
" You let them slip through your fingers like you think some vast, unseen audience will count them on the way down, or something."
Which we totallay are. Great job!
| amai-kaminari chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
ROTFLMAO! OMG That was funny! The image of youkai-Hakkai crawling around on the floor looking for his limiters is priceless!
I love how Hakkai threatened not to cook for them - Sanzo and Gojyo cooking is scary!
hahahahaha! Great job!
| Iliya chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Wow, that was extremely amusing. XD
| Heichoucangetit chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
lmao XD HA, good fic idea, funny thing too, that I know we've all thought in the back of our minds xD You did this well, a thousand stars with interest. -thumbs up-
| vashsunglasses chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
Brilliant! Brilliant I say!
| Twosen chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Brilliant! Love the idea of Hakkai kneeling on the grass like a half-blind-contact-lens-searcher! And with the ikkou so in character too!
Especially love the last bit. _
| CTHKSI chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
I've noticed how all limiters seem to drop in slow motion every time they're taken off. :D
| chaosbfly chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Maybe he doesn't have pockets...? Or he's got things in his pockets. Or maybe his pants are too tight, and he can't get his hands _in_ the pockets unless he wiggles around, you know, and that's a pest when you're fighting...