I don't understand why you made Harry weak in this story - especially with the horrendous character of Vicky - what clichéd teenage so called drama did you get this character from? She was behaving like a petulant drama queen with all the maturity of a toddler, it was a relief when she finally disappeared. As for the rest of the main characters, as everybody seemed to have turned against Harry, not only was his anger and frustration justified, it was necessary for his own wellbeing that he able to express his anger. But you had him being manipulated by everyone, diminishing Harry's feelings. This story would have been better if Harry had been able to work through his anger and feelings of betrayal without being manipulated. You then had the plot take a left turn into endless dull descriptions of why Harry needed to be trained to avoid banshees and veelas, culminating in one of the most pointless chapters of this story where he conveniently becomes a banshai. And just to make things even more ridiculous, Hermione displaying her usual arrogance that she would be able to do his research and her treating him as if she was completely innocent. This was one of the most frustrating stories to read, as there was a little glimpse of what this story could have been but it became overwhelmed by an appallingly badly written story, full of plot holes, clichés and original characters that should have never existed - thankfully this story was abandoned and I have never been more grateful for this fact.

I cant find the fic you referenced in the beginning new world’s order i was eondering if you could send me thr link pretty please? I love yiur fic but i also like the more bloodthirsty harry potter too

Toufaan? Storm? Lol
Also this fic is older than me that's crazy
This is nice, I don't usually read betrayal fics but I found this on insta and I wanted to check it out
Thanks for keeping it up after almost 20 years! I hope you're doing great in life rn

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Harry à le syndrome de Marie Antoinette...

commenting your author notes, lol he seems like a reluctant playboy hahahaha

I thought he was going to talk about how little she thought about him and his grades during the interrogation, like how a truant they thought he was, so no Granger I don't need help

1 He should be in 5 grade
2 Harry is suicidal
3 I loved how submissive he was with the dementors, it was like rutine

This amuse me greatly, well it would make a really short story, but oh the mental image

Harry is not gonna go to Hogwarts, get himself expelled, buy a mansion in cloudy, stormy Transylvania and sit sulking in his castle all the time, coming out occasionally to blast to pieces any owls that might be flying too close to his castle. Even if that may seem more realistic to some of you. For my more bloodthirsty reviewers, I recommend you take a look at 'New World's Order' by World for a more unforgiving and unbending Harry. I honestly think you'll like it.

Even if it is a waste of time or Harry's life

I comment your response on other comments lol, I think It is realistic. And needs strength of character to forgive but not really. Just forgive because of compassion or selfish reason, because you don't want to hurt the other, Don't know how to write this. But what I mean is that it is not as unrealistic as some said, I had been testified of that type of forgiveness in real live.

oh, it is good to have that type of friends, you now positive devils vibe

I am going to comment
lol
I have read white hair, when the protagonist suffers and all the hair tuns white like marianttonieta, and am okay with white hair but i didn't imagine it as strong beautiful white hair you just described, It was more white, thin, fragil as stra, and long as rapunzel now I need to reimagine, but yeah I was okay before I am okay now, thought lucius has his hair like that lol.

Thanks for a really great read so far. Would love to see more of this. Sure hope you find your way back to a sequel at some point.

I HATE the 'you have to forgive them... for your own good'.
It is fun when Harry uses that against the MoB.
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There are things in life that are unforgivable.
Betraying your friend is definitely on the list

TheHogwarts staff are making the situation worse. Haven't they learnt anything about dealing with traumatised children in the decades as teachers?