|Reviews for A Madness Most Discreet|
| Asuna-chan17 chapter 13 . 2/23
I'm in agony...
You've written such a beautiful story! The constant push-and-pull between Touga and Maya is really engaging, and I find myself wincing when I remember this wonderful duo isn't meant to last. For shame, Touga! I love the way you've written your Amayami. She's strong, and yet sometimes very fragile, and her razor-sharp wit and quips make me adore her more. I hope you write more on this story! .
| Alice246 chapter 13 . 1/20/2011
I have been obsessively following this story since the moment I read the first paragraph. While still keeping to the frame of the cannon story, you have created an original and believable story that is utterly devoid of predictability. The foreshadowing is delicious. My only criticisms are that you need to mind your pronouns, because you accidentally mix them, and to check your grammar overall [it's little things, but it fractures the otherwise pleasant flow]. While I understand what you mean on the whole, some of the implied exposition is a bit vague [please note that if a full explanation is forthcoming, I revoke this last comment].
I am anxious to read the next installment, and look forward [after I get some sleep] to read more of your work. Thank you for being awesome and a refreshing well of talent.
| PerfectLover chapter 13 . 3/12/2010
Love this story. I hope you get the chance to update it soon.
| Rickashay chapter 13 . 12/21/2009
You made me speechless, I think this one will go in the never forgotten category. Thank you, even if it remains unfinished.
| Yasminesoul chapter 13 . 12/15/2009
Wow. This was amazing. Great job. I just happened to find this story by luck. I'm not going to beg you to update or anything, just tell you how amazing a writer you are. You managed to make the characters so real. They have layers, just like real people do. The reason I enjoyed this story so much was because it wasn't just a prefect pretty painting of rainbows. A real bond was developing between Touga and Amayami. This puts this fanfiction miles before others (unfinished or not). Love isn't just this wonderfully perfect thing that has one bump in the road that lead to a happy/tragic ending. The whole thing is meant to be a test of how much you really care about this other person. This is present in your writing.
Anyways now that I'm done ranting about the lack of quality writing these days...Outstanding job and I wish you well. Thanks for the amazing read.
| Gryphaena chapter 13 . 10/1/2009
I don't know if you will ever finish this. I hope you are well. May you succeed in your endeavors.
Please know that this will be favorited.
The characters aren't one-dimensional. They seem real. There isn't too much dialogue or too little. The story is easy to read and understand.
I am wondering who would send humans to try to go on youkai lands.
| ItIsSelene chapter 13 . 9/6/2009
This story is amazing. Never before have a read past a oneshot of this pairing, but the first time I did, I must have picked the best one out there. Kudos to you for this awesome story and I hope you pick it back up.
| pua lahi lahi chapter 13 . 7/15/2009
you really have a beautiful story going here, extremely admirable. Please keep writing and updating, this will be a stand out story for this entire section. Thank you very much!
| Gryphaena chapter 13 . 5/10/2009
I hope real life eases up so that you can return to writing.
| fang101 chapter 12 . 11/30/2008
WHY WANT YOU UPDATE! PLEASEA! seriously update
| white enchantress chapter 13 . 9/21/2008
this story is so awesome! i think you need to update! SOON!
| Kaitlin Roberts chapter 9 . 9/17/2008
PLEASE Please please finish 'A Madness Most Discreet'
i luv your story and i wanna read the rest of it,
so PLEASE finish it, if it help i'll tell u how many times i've read it, cause i've it about 5 times, ME LUV UR FANFIC
| Kaitlin Roberts chapter 13 . 9/7/2008
i luv it, please finish the story, please please please! i want to read the rest of the story. I LUV IT!
| makka-na-yuki chapter 13 . 8/18/2008
This is my first time reading about Inu no Taisho and Sess' mom, and you made me fall in love with the pairing. The story is absolutely wonderful.
| beaBIANCA chapter 13 . 6/25/2008
this story is amazing so far. update soon (: