|Reviews for Breathing His Breath|
| blalala chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Wow, that was just . . . wow.
Write more please :)
| rhapsody14 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
this story is really beatiful
| M.M.H chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Great description! Maybe you should write something like this in Ranma's point of view.
| spiralnoteboooks chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Very good job! Your writing style is unique and strong. This one-shot was very tender, and beautifully written. I hope that you keep on writing fanfictions, for this one was amazing!
| Taechunsa chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
That was a very nicely done story.
The portrayal of the emotions and feelings was excellently portrayed.
| kph2pt0yahoo.com chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
Wow, so lovely _ I'm starved for good Ranma/Akane fanfic, thank you for this!
| Half-elf chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
I really enjoyed the abstract feeling of this and the rhythm is wonderful. Very nicely done.
| Dwinny chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
Fantastic, poetic, everything that one-shots usually aren't. Very nicely done. I enjoyed it immensely.
| Shandrial chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
This is a nice, different take on Akane. People generally make her a bit too hotheaded. Its nice to see the gentler side. And I always love stories were we get to peak into her mind and see she really does love Ranma. Excellent and well written.
| Jenna chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Beautiful! Great work!
| Concetta chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
Holy . . . crap . . .
That was so beautiful and poetic! It's going under favorites!
. . . Wow.
| Priestess Kohana chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Wow...that was really beautiful. Fantastic job!
| Lunar Ember chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
short sentences. almost disjointed thoughts. irregular patterns. i loved the way you used them. ah... everything about this fic is beautiful. great imagery. everything's just plain great. :)
| Angela Jewell chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
ooh... wow. I LOVED this. It's so rare to read a story that's written in 2nd person-especially one that's written so well!
Great job. _
| Myuu-Foxgirl chapter 1 . 7/2/2004