Reviews for The Quest
nornfreaky chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
yeah, i'm working on a sequel. the grendels won. but Fire the second (Wind and Fires son) will go and try to do what his father couldn't it's gonna be good! (i hope :D)
Officer 1BDI chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
*Also wonders why would drop indentions half-way through the story*
I liked it, but the ending was... abrupt. A description of the battle itself would have been nice.
I'm kind of hoping, considering who won in the end, that you let Wind survive so the "good guys" still had a chance; say, in an upcoming sequel? Otherwise, your ending is kind of depressing, (good and unexpected, but sad nonetheless). Overall, nice job.
nornfreaky chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
*wonders why some of the indentions dissapeared*
they were there when i wrote it! honest! :)
sorry it isn't indented at the end