Reviews for Seduction by Darkness |
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![]() ![]() Needs more B / Hrm subtext :( |
![]() ![]() Angst and subtext! My two favourite things! |
![]() ![]() Oh yeah! Please be Buffy / Hermione! Oh yes please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic Story. Such a unique way of approaching things. I know your writing is never going to be cliché. LOVED the ending! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.o there was a Buffy/Hermione angle... seriously? Thanks for finishing the story by the way, I don't think I told you that yet despite the number of times I've read this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once more, I am suitably impressed :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how u write with no parings...that way no one gets annoyed with a pairing they don't like |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering when Harry going to show up. I take it that Harry isn't going to be the main character at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very awesome! |
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![]() ![]() I know that one goal of a good writer is to engage the reader's emotions, but this chapter has me furious. Order of the Phoenix? Ha! Order of the Rubber Chicken is more like it. Obviously the elder Potters have water for blood and rocks for brains. James identified Malfoy as one of the abductors - why is he not upside down over a fire while James and Lilly skin him with a rusty razor until he identifies his accomplices and where they took Ellie? I would settle for having Malfoy leaking Veritaserum from every pore, but to do nothing about an identified Death Eater and kidnapper smacks of idiocy and anyone suggesting he should be left alone can go sit on a hot poker. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great, creative story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Coolio ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story all round, nice characterisations and you still allowed Harry to be a hero too, which a lot of crossover fics don't. But most of all...Ally McBeal reference in chapter 49? 'I think I've missed you most of all, Scarecrow?' lLso the charmed inference during the prophecy - I was actually thinking as I read it; 'Gosh this is all getting a bit Charmed-esque.' But yeah, good story, well done. |