Reviews for Empty
LittleLurker chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
Very, very good - the way you capture their emotions, their thoughts in this

difficult time and your style is just beautiful. Loved it, really!

Please write some more... Thanks, D.
Sciffy chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
*incoherent babble*
it's too good. I love your Neo, and can identify with your Trinity. *bows down*
Divamercury chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
AWESOME story. Seems very, very true to character. I enjoyed this so much! Wonderful work.
atrinityfan chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
You had me in tears. Wonderful! I love the interaction between Neo and Trinity.
thespin chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
This is really nice. Most people can't pull off angsty Trinity... so many post M1 fics just aren't believeable. But this grief worked for me. And Neo is spot on.
"And every time he opens his mouth, it just seems too selfish to say
it hurts
i miss them too.
So things are silent."
Perfectly Neo. We don't see enough of that either. Hope to see more from you.
kumulonimbus chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
i liked it, yes, it's descriptive and insirative. am i right if i say that your text (in some passages) sounds a little abstract without wanting it to? anyway, i liked it. it's deep and it seems that you chose each word more than carefully.
wood work.
silvercat2 chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
Your discriptive ability is incredible. You make the characters come alive.