|Reviews for Power Of Darkness|
| AliceTobor chapter 10 . 3/27
There are now more Harry/Bellatrix, including too many incomplete.
There is a Harry/Hogwarts by kb0
I have not seen any Harry/Goblin Princess... Tho Harry Crow comes closest.
Wizards can turn into an animal, perhaps a magical enough animal could turn into a Witch?
This would open up Harry/Hedwig, Harry/dragongirl, Harry/Phoenix...
Harry and Rowena or Helga? Time travel and a philosophers stone?
I don't like Harry and Draco but really wonder why there is only one Harry and Draconica.
(Draconica is the little sister of Draco, and the same age as Harry)
Female Harry is done quite a lot, but female Draco is war under explored.
| AliceTobor chapter 8 . 3/27
The prophecy is not about Tom.
Albus Dumbledore is the true dark lord of the story.
Tom will torture and kill, the death eaters will rape as well.
(Does Tom still HAVE a dick? Do snakes have them?)
But in fairly short order the victims will be dead.
Dumbledore tortured Harry Potter for over a decade by putting him in Durskaban!
Albus controlled Harry Potter all his life. Even his wife was not his choice.
Dumbledore is the true dark lord!
| AliceTobor chapter 3 . 3/27
The base idea behind Harry Potter is GREAT.
Rowling then took a diamond and transfigured it into dung.
I would like to hit her in the head with a frying pan and throw her in a tiny cupboard locking her in for a day.
Not owning Harry Potter IS a blessing!
| maya chapter 25 . 3/5
in all honesty, i prefer bellamione. bella/harry just doesnt work for me. i mean, its still a great story though. im enjoying it a lot.
| Guest chapter 31 . 4/17/2022
Pages too short . Arguments all the time . Not enough action from Harry
You are more abusive than the Dursleys.
| BLWebtoonweeb chapter 15 . 4/14/2022
ok! got some cringy ship names for Bella and harry!
4. Barry(?)[idk i don't like it as much as the ones above]
| Silent Namikaze chapter 19 . 1/12/2022
The fact that kid just show's up out of nowhere and they accept him and there's no defences in the library makes no sense. And the brat is annoying as fuck.
| C3nterF0ld chapter 31 . 1/3/2022
huh ..? what a rushed ending. I wonder what you could've wrote had you done it nowadays. I bet you could take this idea and really flesh her out
| C3nterF0ld chapter 20 . 1/3/2022
OH THIS IS WHY ITS SO FRUSTRATING THE AUTHOR WAS 14 AT THE TIME OF WRITING. oh this all makes sense now! OK I can read this in a different light then knowing this.
| C3nterF0ld chapter 18 . 1/3/2022
for a romance story there is seriously none of it. the interactions between Bella and Harry are very few and far between. there's novel's worth of introspection sometimes in between actions. it's so frustrating. and these ocs and the dreams and Sirius being alive I just.. uuuuggghhhhhhh
| C3nterF0ld chapter 12 . 1/3/2022
if this story wasn't completed I'd probably bow out. these chapters are so short and filled with so much filler shit it's driving me insane. every chapter feels like it was cut off prematurely and the character interactions are annoying at best. there's no much story left tbh at this point cause I know it's actually a really short story, but how the hell a relationship is supposed to start and function as well as volde getting canned somehow doesn't make any sense with the time leftimma keep pushing through though. if only for the sake of this being the first BL/HP there ever was
| Thiago-Gamer12 chapter 17 . 12/27/2021
the second name of Sirius is Orion
| Yaw613 chapter 31 . 12/20/2021
Please write a sequel to this story already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
| Yaw6113 chapter 31 . 12/4/2021
Please write a sequel already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
| josh chapter 3 . 10/5/2021
fine i guess.