Rare pairings...

There are now more Harry/Bellatrix, including too many incomplete.

There is a Harry/Hogwarts by kb0

I have not seen any Harry/Goblin Princess... Tho Harry Crow comes closest.

Wizards can turn into an animal, perhaps a magical enough animal could turn into a Witch?
This would open up Harry/Hedwig, Harry/dragongirl, Harry/Phoenix...

Harry and Rowena or Helga? Time travel and a philosophers stone?

I don't like Harry and Draco but really wonder why there is only one Harry and Draconica.
(Draconica is the little sister of Draco, and the same age as Harry)

Female Harry is done quite a lot, but female Draco is war under explored.

The prophecy is not about Tom.
Albus Dumbledore is the true dark lord of the story.

Tom will torture and kill, the death eaters will rape as well.
(Does Tom still HAVE a dick? Do snakes have them?)
But in fairly short order the victims will be dead.

Dumbledore tortured Harry Potter for over a decade by putting him in Durskaban!
Albus controlled Harry Potter all his life. Even his wife was not his choice.
Dumbledore is the true dark lord!

The base idea behind Harry Potter is GREAT.

Rowling then took a diamond and transfigured it into dung.

I would like to hit her in the head with a frying pan and throw her in a tiny cupboard locking her in for a day.

Not owning Harry Potter IS a blessing!

in all honesty, i prefer bellamione. bella/harry just doesnt work for me. i mean, its still a great story though. im enjoying it a lot.

Pages too short . Arguments all the time . Not enough action from Harry
You are more abusive than the Dursleys.

ok! got some cringy ship names for Bella and harry!
1. HellaTrix
2. HellTrix
3. TrixyPott
4. Barry(?)[idk i don't like it as much as the ones above]

The fact that kid just show's up out of nowhere and they accept him and there's no defences in the library makes no sense. And the brat is annoying as fuck.

huh ..? what a rushed ending. I wonder what you could've wrote had you done it nowadays. I bet you could take this idea and really flesh her out

OH THIS IS WHY ITS SO FRUSTRATING THE AUTHOR WAS 14 AT THE TIME OF WRITING. oh this all makes sense now! OK I can read this in a different light then knowing this.

for a romance story there is seriously none of it. the interactions between Bella and Harry are very few and far between. there's novel's worth of introspection sometimes in between actions. it's so frustrating. and these ocs and the dreams and Sirius being alive I just.. uuuuggghhhhhhh

if this story wasn't completed I'd probably bow out. these chapters are so short and filled with so much filler shit it's driving me insane. every chapter feels like it was cut off prematurely and the character interactions are annoying at best. there's no much story left tbh at this point cause I know it's actually a really short story, but how the hell a relationship is supposed to start and function as well as volde getting canned somehow doesn't make any sense with the time leftimma keep pushing through though. if only for the sake of this being the first BL/HP there ever was

the second name of Sirius is Orion

Please write a sequel to this story already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Please write a sequel already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

fine i guess.