Reviews for Dark Convergence
One percent chapter 3 . 5/21/2015
This is the first time that I read about how exactly Meryl and Milly met and how they got their super risky jobs. And I really liked it! Meryl sounded like she was jealous of the popularity of Milly with boys. That was funny. Milly sure is aware of her abilities and short comings: not many people could call themselves dumb and mean it.

I was impressed by the Bernardelli back story. Simply perfect and believable.

Also... Will Meryl really be able to stick to her no boyfriend rule? We'll see. *grins*
One percent chapter 2 . 5/21/2015
This is very mysterious! Vash used his powers and I wonder if it was his brother who helped me or not. I have a suspicion that it was not! This is so exciting! Having Vash react differently to circumstances without his memory.

And your description is increadible. The last sentence made a good visual impact. I am officially addicted now. :)
One percent chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
Wow that was a great start. If it is really going to picture a darker version of Vash, then I will trade the original for this. Sorry Vash.

Also, chiken vulture for the win. I am glad Knives is in there too.
Alyson Metallium chapter 32 . 10/6/2013
Loooooooooooove the twisting this story has taken. And now I want to get the Dark Vash figure because wow! So many questions, but still a lot of fun. :D
SpookyKatie chapter 32 . 8/1/2012
Oh my goodness it's been a while! Wow... I can't think of the right way to say how amazing this one was! This chapter... Wow! When are ya'll going to up-date?
EvilFaerie17 chapter 32 . 1/16/2012
Oh my gosh, finally! I've been waiting for this to happen ever since I started reading this story! Now I'm just waiting to see how everything is gonna turn out, lol.

Will Meryl get with Vash, or will she be unable to see past his past - or her own stubbornness (though she seems to have finally realized that she likes bad boys *especially THIS bad boy*, lol)? OR, in a different turn of events, will she find Knives and end up with him, no matter what Vash tries to do or how she feels about him? OR, in a completely different turn of events, will she end up with both of them, since she seems to have a certain mystifying effect on both Plant men? Lol, now that would be interesting.

And Milly, at last! She's found her two men again! They are all so cutely devoted to each other, haha. It makes me smile every time I read it. I wouldn't be surprised at any pairing you gave to Milly. I love both just the same in this story :)

In any case, please update soon! I can't wait to read what happens next, I'm dying here! Lol. At first I wasn't sure how I was gonna like a Dark!Vash story with a Good!Knives, but it's actually really amazing so far. I love it. In the beginning I was slightly confused but I understood everything the more I read.

btw, I'm curious. I'm kinda liking the new look for Vash, but I do have a soft spot for his golden blonde hair and aqua eyes... _ So my question is this: Are y'all gonna keep him looking this way, with the silvery-white hair and red eyes, or are y'all gonna change him back? I'm excited to find out!

I'm surprised that you've had this story going for so many years! I know you mentioned something last chapter about how it's gonna be winding up soon, but do you have an guesstimate on how many more chapters y'all are gonna do, or is that something I'm just gonna have to keep waiting and reading to find out? lol, I don't mind, I love this story and don't want it to end just yet _

Anyways, this is getting ridiculously long, so I shall say my farewells. This is a wonderfully written story and it really pulled me in :) Please update as soon as you can!

ttfn!

Faerie
mylittlehollow chapter 32 . 12/23/2011
Alright, a new chapter. Vash is such a tool, so if he is waiting for Meryl to admit she has feelings for him; he'll be waiting for forever and a day. Meryl is to proud to be so easily seduced and overcome. I really liked this chapter by the way, especially with all the hot Vash and Meryl action.
Raidergirl72 chapter 31 . 11/6/2011
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you. I thought you would never come back. I love the chapter. Vash is in turmoil over his feelings and I'm still wondering about Knives and the others but I'm gonna keep my thoughts to myself about that. But just so ya know, the anticipation is killing me. Anyway thanks again and hopefully you will give us more soon. Please :)
Celesma chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
This is a really interesting beginning! The descriptions and mystery - and the promise of dark!Vash, of course - really drew me in. Great job, and I'm only at the prologue~

The last line made me laugh. :) Knives (I'm gonna assume it's Knives) eating a vulture and pretending it's chicken...
iamfaraway chapter 30 . 6/15/2011
Hello! I just read through all of the chapters of your fanfiction, and I really love it. I’m impressed with your characterization, your control of tone and plot, and the overall writing! I also really love how you include minor characters, and even flesh them out. It really enriches the story. I really hope you continue, though I see you haven’t updated in a long time… I would really like to see where this is going, and what happened in the past that changed Vash and Knives so drastically. And I want to see Knives and Wolfwood again. I miss them (and Milly does too…).

This has been such an interesting read, so thank for you sharing it with us! I really hope you continue. : )
Qualia Des chapter 30 . 4/23/2011
I just recently started to dig through all of my favourites lists on various fanfic websites again - which led to me spending past day and a half re-reading this fantastic story. Man, I still remember the days when when I first stumbled upon this story (it was on the 10th chapter I think?) and being amazed at the depth and adventure you guys infused it all with.

Now that I've finally read the whole thing back-to-back and all in one go, I just appreciate that all the more. Characterization is awesome, and the romantic development is lovely. (It's reasonable! Now that I'm past my ragin' hormone of my youth, I realize how redundant all of those fast-paced romances are - the pacing you guys have for the romances in here are perfect.) Also, bonus props for finally having a goodly amount of Vash/Meryl time!

But significantly less props for the tantalizing ship tease cliffhanger this chapter offers. Well, double-cliffhanger, with the whole mystery of that voice in Vash's head. (My personal theory is that it's canon Vash plying the whup-ass on Dark Vash so that he stops denying his guilt over July. :D Then I hope that leads to some sexytimes between him and Meryl, because dangit, I've been waiting for some V/M sexytimes in this fic for what...half a decade now? :P)

As always, enormous, enormous kudos for soldiering on with this fic. It's an unfortunate fact of life that the Trigun fandom is pretty much a tumbleweed now compared to the rollicking Deep Space Future Planet [of Gun Action] it used to be. Yet, you guys keep pumping out the goods, and just as insanely good as its ever been. :) I hope you two stick to this long enough for us readers to see to its end!
Raidergirl72 chapter 30 . 10/2/2010
Thank you! Thank You! Thank you! So I'm pondering on the voice in Vash's head. I have my suspicions but I will wait. I think Vash should go join Alcoholics Anonymous. Great job and keep em coming. Pretty Please :)
Salkarda chapter 29 . 9/18/2010
Oh, I really like this story. This is very interesting, though at first I did not understand the plot

I'm a fan of Wolfwood / Milly and Livio / Milly. * _ *

I hope to see the continuation of this wonderful story! _
Raidergirl72 chapter 29 . 6/2/2010
Ok, I really thought I wasn't going to like this because I never liked the idea of a bad Vash. Well I have to say that I have really enjoyed this. I'm even cheering for Knives and Meryl which is unusual for me cause I like Vash & Meryl. I got to the last chapter and I just about cried when I realized its not complete yet. Please tell me that I won't have to wait very long to read more.
Aine of Knockaine chapter 29 . 5/23/2010
Welcome back ladies!

A quite the welcome par-tay that has accompanied your return too! Even Dark Vash has arrived! And can I just say that I love the fact that they thought he was an old man... (well technically he is huh? Haha!)

Another wonderful chapter, but I will admit I AM quite worried about the others... hopefully there will be status update on our boys in the next chapter?

Until the next chapter (which I hope is soon...)

XOXOXO from GA (Yup it's official and the reason why it took so long for me to review)

Aine
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