Reviews for Dead Silence
Shapeshifter chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
Ooh! That was really well-written! I liked the emphasis the repetition provided in your poem. The dramatic effect was excellent and the thoughts were well-versed. The abruptness of some of the lines really made the poem feel harsh and sorrowful and really highlighted the mood. Very nicely done; you should write more! Or maybe write a story (HP? .~)... keep up the good work!


(I would write more but I'm supposed to be doing "homework"- aka writing my story- now)
crazed-strawberr chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
its really good.