Reviews for Lost in the Supermarket
MusicMagicMurder chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Lol, this is so great! More, more!
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
A great story. I liked the part where Wesley took Illyria grocery shopping.
VeroniqueClaire chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Astonishingly good characterizations - it's very hard to write Illyria without making her sound like a caricature, but you've mastered her voice perfectly here. Also, "his Fred filled heart shattering into a thousand pieces" is a fantastic line. Cheers!
bobo chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
ha. very nicely written. cute and funny. well done
Elizabeth Scripturient chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
[here via crack_van on LJ]

“It is important to you,” she starts. “That I do not use what is left of her to try and find my place.”

“Yes.”

“Then there is no need for apologies.”

I really like that part.

And then the stuff about the meat products. Spot-on Illyria, from the entrails to the blood.

And then the stuff about the cows. Reading it I thought, "COWS! PYLEA! FRED!"

The ending seems kinda random, though. I mean, I get that Wesley's function is to teach Illyria how to function in human society, but all this build-up for the "paper or plastic" question?
uktechgirl chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Came over on the crack_van rec. Amazing story: you nail the characters perfectly, and I would have loved to see this.
wild wolf free17 chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
Wonderful!
Ms Arano chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Interesting. Like the perspective, that I do _
MidCircleNine chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Too cool. I loved the interactions between the two, and the little things that would normally be without thought, made to be seen differently because of Illyria's having never seen or experianced anything like it. The supermarket was an especially nice setting, because we're so used to it.

Very nice.
suey chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
That's excellent - I love the dialogue, really captures her especially.

And what a great idea for a story. Must find a way to steal it!
AGirlWonder chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
This is one of the first "Angel" stories I've read. And I love it. (More specifically, I love Illyria.)
Dark Viola chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
Wonderful. Just wonderful.
Energy chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Quite good! I love Illyria and even though I miss Fred, she's a great char. You captured them realy well. But don't you just sometimes miss the old Wes? Well God job
Energy chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Quite good! I love Illyria and even though I miss Fred, she's a great char. You captured them realy well. But don't you just sometimes miss the old Wes? Well God job
Energy chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Quite good! I love Illyria and even though I miss Fred, she's a great char. You captured them realy well. But don't you just sometimes miss the old Wes? Well God job
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